I Am Here - Comments

First off, this was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. You literally gave me goosebumps! I absolutely wanted to cry when I reached the end.

Second, your writing is wonderful in itself. I intend to recommend this story and I hope others enjoy it as much as I did.

Third, I love your layout. Yellow is one of my favorite colors. (:

that is so beautiful

No part of this story was anywhere near boring. This was a beautifully crafted story that one of the characters was inspired from your passed friend. At first you think maybe he knew all along and just felt sorry for her but then you realize he was oblivious at first and it was all fate. How she survived all those years was a wonder and you think maybe she found her guardien angel and they finally meet. The ending is sad but actually happy because they all meet in heaven I'm thinking. Also wonderful grammar and spelling. :)

This is the most beautiful thing I have ever read.

I'm crying, oh my god. This is gorgeous.

@ eminems_stan93
Awwww! Thanks! I'm so glad you loved it!

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Oh oh oh. I've NEVER read a story that made me cry, completely thrown off gaurd. I just kept reading until the end, because you had me at every word. Possibly the best story I've gotton from comment swap and I'm not kidding, and I wouldnt just say that. I love it, in love with it, gosssh! < 3

That was...moving. I liked how the story ended and I'm sorry about your friend...

That was possibly the saddest thing I have ever read.

@ SyFyWolf
I'm so glad you liked it
I definitely miss him a lot. He was a great person and it's upsetting that I had to realise after his death, not to take anyone for granted. That you might not see them again.
Thanks for reading!

@ saber cat lucas
I'm glad you enjoyed the short ride!

Fabulous!

That was so sad!! :'(
I really liked the story!
I'm sorry to hear about your friend :'(

@ xXLoveForEternityXx
No worries. I'm very emotional haha, but I'm pretty sure it triggered some emotion in your other readers as well. How could it not? It was so real, and raw and so....beautiful. Argggggh. I'm so sad it's over! And yes, adding Leigh into the mix definitely did that for me.

@ hellobeautiful
Thankyou! Yes I definitely wanted Leigh to erase any guesses towards her being dead.
I'm surprised I made you cry As you could tell, the story might be a little emotional for me, but I didn't think I'd make anyone else cry. I'm glad (which sounds weird) that I could write something deep enough to make someone cry.
Thanks for reading! I'd definitely accept a double recommendation!

Oh no! The ending and the author's note definitely made me cry. It really is funny that I wished he existed. I'm so happy she was there when Leigh died. I had a feeling the reason she was so invisible and the reason she didn't feel cold was because she was dead, but when you introduced Leigh, I dropped that thought. Now, I know I was right all along. You did such a fabulous job with this story. I really REALLY loved it and I wish I could recommend it for a second time haha. Great work and congratulations on writing such a beautiful, heartwarming story! :)

@ saber cat lucas
Yes. The story is complete. I wanted it simple and short. Hope you liked it

Is it over?? I love how you based leigh off the real person.

@ TaraJanee
My use of Leigh was purely for my own purposes It sets the tone of the story for me, because it makes my writing and reading it more emotional. I miss him

@ hellobeautiful
Funny that you should wish that Leigh existed --- read the authors note in my final chapter it's up now! I'm glad you loved it!

Oh nooooo. It's coming to an end? I really enjoyed reading this story. It was very beautifully written and I don't know why, but I'm just in love with that yellow background; it just screams "hope" to me. I love this Leigh character and I wish he existed! Update soon, although I'm quite sad it will be over.

Ahhh I wanna know what happens! :D