When the Moon Rises - Comments

Wow, you've updated this story really quickly! Proud of you <3

Gah he is so cute! Great chapter as always! :)

Awe so sweet. Loved this chapter. I can't wait for him to propose to her. I know it'll be really awesome. Great update.

@ TaraJanee
:S oh wow Thank you so much~ I will update as soon as I can!

So I just wrote an awfully long comment and accidentally refreshed the page! So here goes mirroring it! Hahaha

This story is quite wonderful! First of all, I adore Matts's character. The way you have written him is so realistic and constructs actual behaviour and imagery in my head. It's also a major plus that he's a drummer, as my boyfriend is one! ;)

The writing is very good and creatively construed together. At times it can be simple, but I believe a story like this needs that. There's a short, sweet nature about it that I think would be far more effective than applied long sentences! I particularly fell in love with when Simon is all, "Matt you look high as fuck!" Ahh it was hilariously real that I couldn't help but feel he would have looked so romantic! Naw!

Oh and when Matt is all "pardon?" When he's walking her home. Ah that's the cutest! Boys that say pardon hahaha :') He's definitley a refreshingly gentleman character, thought it's thankfully not overdone. But when he gets all threatening at Will, you could say I have a crush! ;)

Such a good read! Update sooooon!

@ fallen__girl @ Loving Wolf Girl
You two are just amazing :) I might not update for a day or so but don't fret because I will be planning the next few chapters and I really want to make them detailed and special

It's cute. I like that you made it where some time had passed. Evie's relationship with Matt's mother is really cute. I love how they are really close and his mother can joke about grandchildren in front of both her and Matt. I love that the mom and Evie was going through baby pictures and the comment about the laptop. This is a really cute chapter. Looking forward to the next.

That's kinda halirous if I was a mom and my son brought home a girlfriend I'd break out the baby pictures to! Lol great chapter :)

@ Just.Us.Here.Tonight
haha okay I love your signature btw

@ Loving Wolf Girl
that sounds good to me I do have some idea of how to continue the story but I just wanted your opinions on whether or not it would just be dragging the story out

Plus...I'd love to see Matt propose to Evie in front of her parents. It'd be kinda cute.

Keep the story going please. You could do all of the things you listed. Start out with meeting the family, then marriage, then you can do a brief sex scene or a descriptive one (whichever you want), then babies. That way it's more to the story. Its whatever you want to happen.

Please don't end the story right now! I'd love to see some fluff :)

@ fallen__girl
I'll put it toward the votes I like that idea as well :3 Imagine adorable little Evie's and Matt's running around the house, so cute~

I'm sorry to hear about your bad day. Wonderful chapter as always :). I think it would be so cute if they got married and had children :D

@ xXLoveForEternityXx
thank you so much <3 I update at least one chapter a day

Okay! I've finished the chapters! Man, I flew through them! It was so easy to read and I caught myself smiling on more than one occasion! I'm loving that Evie isn't the typical: "Oh my God, you didn't tell me right from the beggining that you were a werewolf so how can I trust you?"
I find it is nice to see that she is open to the supernatural world :)
Love the progress the story is taking! And am looking forward to seeing where it goes! I'm staying subscribed! You best update often!

This is a quick comment (I'll be writing a more detailed one in a moment ) I just wanted to note - you had me on the first paragraph! I LOVE DRUMMERS! And more importantly, their little drumstick twirl! Hehe!

Ah! I loved the last update! Moooooree, please :)

@ Loving Wolf Girl
thank you so much, i'm glad you liked this chapter haha I"m glad you like the twilight reference

Awwwww. I'm happy now. That was an awesome New Year chapter. It was really sweet. I'm glad Evie did take the werewolf thing well. And I love the Edward Cullen comment. That was cute. Great Chapter and Happy New Years!