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  • kayk33

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    Kinda liking Saad.... Weird. But this was great, as usual. I'm curious to see where you take this.
    June 22nd, 2013 at 03:11pm
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    I think Kane or Hossa or Sharp
    June 21st, 2013 at 01:42am
  • polishpearlsparis

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    You should write from Hossa's point of view or Sharpie's point of view. Write from the point of view that is an outsider to the situation and can see clearly what is going on. If you wrote from Brent's, Kaner's, Saad's, or her point of view we would only see the situation from their point of view. Maybe even Q's point of view. :)
    June 20th, 2013 at 09:39pm
  • danielle_12

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    Whoa! Plot Twist another guy!! haha wow... hmmm 6'2 and since he was talking and said them I'm guessing its not Pat, Jon or Brandon... now just to figure out who is at that height. I love this story and hope you update soon!
    June 17th, 2013 at 06:35am
  • HereinParadise

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    NOT SURE WHAT JUST HAPPENED BUT IM SOBBING. I THINK IT'S BRANDONS P.O.V JKDSFHLKJHLKJDHFIUKLHTGJFH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    June 17th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • kayk33

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    Does Pat honestly think pushing her into Tazer's arms is going to help him? He needs to get his head out of his ass. But loved the update :)
    June 6th, 2013 at 03:39pm
  • marscapoon

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    How come no one is Team Tazer?! Guess my real life love for Captain Serious is making me biased towards Tazer in this story. Can't wait to see where this goes!
    June 6th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • HereinParadise

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    Loooved the update. Still don't like Tazer.
    June 6th, 2013 at 03:55am
  • HereinParadise

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    Oh my god oh my god oh my god. This chapter was my favourite so far. Team Pat bc he's a sweetheart. MY FEEEELLLSSSSSSSSS
    May 29th, 2013 at 08:19pm
  • kartal1984

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    ohhhh nice one!!! Drama - I love it!!! :) I think I would like to see her back with Pat!!! Update again soon please, can't wait to see what happens... :)
    May 29th, 2013 at 08:12pm
  • abbesin

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    This is getting good. She needs to bec with Pat.
    May 29th, 2013 at 08:02pm
  • Im_Cupid

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    Everyone is so obsessed with this story my god ur famouusssee Shocked
    May 28th, 2013 at 03:07pm
  • ShortAndLovingIt

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    I totally agree with @HereinParadise!!!! Team Pat all the way!
    May 28th, 2013 at 01:36am
  • HereinParadise

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    I hope she ends up with Kaner. GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER PAT AND TALK TO THE GIRL
    May 27th, 2013 at 11:21pm
  • abbesin

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    I hope she ends up with Pat!!!!!
    May 27th, 2013 at 09:45pm
  • pswift219

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    Team Pat all the way!! Great job with this story so far, you can capture the emotions of everyone pretty well! And I sooooo called the Kaner and Tazer ending up in a bar!
    May 26th, 2013 at 09:58am
  • kayk33

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    Team Patrick! It sounds like that other guy (from Toronto) may be interested in Briella.
    May 24th, 2013 at 10:02pm
  • HereinParadise

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    Still team Patrick
    May 24th, 2013 at 09:15pm
  • Star Angel

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    love this please update soon
    May 24th, 2013 at 09:53am
  • HereinParadise

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    Jon is an ass. Ooops. Team Kaner all the way.
    May 24th, 2013 at 05:20am
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