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  • Sparxx

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    Ok I know I prob shouldn't but i LOVE Harry in this chapter!!!! I feel like he was a little bit venerable with her. I don't know maybe that's crazy but I liked it!!! You wrote him beautifully, I'm so looking forward 2 seeing more of Harry and Rae!!
    January 11th, 2013 at 04:38am
  • Lawliet.

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    This was a really interesting chapter... I sorta loved Harry in this one for some reason :P
    haha update again soon!
    January 10th, 2013 at 11:32pm
  • Ncgirl1995

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    lol that was a good one.
    January 10th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • justSJ

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    awww i love this. that was sweet.
    January 10th, 2013 at 07:07am
  • Ncgirl1995

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    Update biznatch.
    January 10th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • Chemicals Collide

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    Loving this! Seriously everything just blends so well. All the way from your writing, to the characters, to the dialogs. Two thumbs up!
    January 9th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • Zen Molek

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    LOVED IT!
    every chapter I get more and more sucked in omg

    i loved the hallucination she had going on with the stars! haha
    January 8th, 2013 at 07:07am
  • Sparxx

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    That was awesome!!!! I loved reading Harry's point of view!!
    January 8th, 2013 at 04:09am
  • Lawliet.

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    haha wow that was really unexpected :p
    its sweet that he took care of her, even though he only wants to tell her 'i told you so'
    update soon!
    January 7th, 2013 at 11:48pm
  • lovelyacoustic

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    video notes are cool with me!! :) i love how harry was begrudgingly there for her, and how she STILL detests him! xD
    January 7th, 2013 at 10:51pm
  • Juno

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    well harry helped her, but of course he has to be an ass about it.
    jerk.
    January 7th, 2013 at 06:59pm
  • QuiQuiQuishy

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    Hahaha! Harry was right!
    January 7th, 2013 at 07:30am
  • the_space_between

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    Gaaaaaaaa!!! I absolutely loooooove this so much it hurts!! I need you to update all the time please!!
    January 7th, 2013 at 07:28am
  • Ncgirl1995

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    @ Carpe Diem !
    I know I know. I feel like i betrayed my Niall... but its good.
    January 7th, 2013 at 01:56am
  • Carpe Diem !

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    @ Ncgirl1995
    wow, you actually read a Harry story?!
    January 7th, 2013 at 01:12am
  • Ncgirl1995

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    NEXT UP-DATE!! NEXT UP-DATE!! NEXT UP-DATE!!
    January 7th, 2013 at 12:54am
  • Zen Molek

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    Ahhhh! Can't wait till they could talk forreals and she starts developing feelings and what not!
    January 6th, 2013 at 10:18pm
  • Sparxx

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    Wow total plot twist there!!!! I love it and really who doesn't love a little Niall!!!! So don't worry I still love u!!! (I know u were deeply concerned about that!)
    January 6th, 2013 at 07:31am
  • Lawliet.

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    YES PLOT TWIST INDEED
    but it was still extremely interesting
    haha and lou and niall are gonna get in trouble... shes gonna get maaaad
    haha update again soon!
    January 6th, 2013 at 07:05am
  • Juno

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    you pulled the niall card!
    man shit is about to hit the fan. I know it
    January 6th, 2013 at 07:02am