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  • Checkmate Joy

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    Also, cool story and stuff

    I think its a good story, but I think readers were probably more interested at the start than now, but still good story. Im jumping overboard, but let that mean nothing.
    May 7th, 2013 at 12:44am
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    @ xLadySparrow
    I'm not taking sides, but when one says 'no offence' it means no offence intended, however the other participant has the choice to take it into offence. Just making it clear. I used to believe that too, till I read into the actual definition.
    May 7th, 2013 at 12:43am
  • Anarchist Beauty

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    @ Ellss
    Do you know how many people I have met who have identified as a lesbian and started dating a guy? It's ridiculous. Let's not confine people under one label. ^-^
    May 6th, 2013 at 08:25pm
  • Ellss

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    BUT I THOUGH ROXY WAS A LESBIAN
    May 6th, 2013 at 07:45am
  • Anarchist Beauty

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    @ BirdsChildren
    THANK-YOU! Holy crap you're like my new favorite person right now. I don't know why no one else can see that Roxy and Andy are good together. Even Angel said she's a good match for him!

    Also an update for everyone: I think I am only going to post one more chapter on this story then I am going to make a sequel for everything else that is going to happen. Like the extension of Vera going to school, Roxy asking Andy if there's a way to become human again... Things like that.
    May 5th, 2013 at 07:22pm
  • BirdsChildren

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    I think Roxy is a WAY better match for Andy!! Her character profile matches way better then Veronica's does... I think the story has become way better since Roxy's arrival and I hope you don't change back to the Veronica/Andy relationship <3
    Don't listen to what the others are saying; this story is amazing just the way it is and makes more sense now then it did before.
    May 5th, 2013 at 03:26pm
  • Anarchist Beauty

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    @ lyrainthedark
    Angel added me on to the story because I was writing 90% of it anyway and I didn't change anything without her permission.
    Also, adding "no offence" doesn't take away me being offended. If you don't like what the story has become, stop reading or offer CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
    May 5th, 2013 at 09:31am
  • lyrainthedark

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    I just don't understand why you had to take over and change the story. no offense!
    May 5th, 2013 at 08:36am
  • Anarchist Beauty

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    @ lyrainthedark
    What do you mean by "hijacking it"?
    May 5th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • lyrainthedark

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    This story isn't an airplane, please stop hijacking it. I think Roxy is a great character but maybe for another story.
    May 5th, 2013 at 01:32am
  • FreeRebel

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    I'm lost now cause all this time I was hoping that Veronica and Andy will end up together. it's great story but still. I'm sad now
    May 4th, 2013 at 07:58am
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    @ DePrEsSiOn_PoEm
    Don't worry. I have plenty of things planned for this story/a sequel. Be patient and I promise Vera will end up in a good place, too.
    May 4th, 2013 at 12:47am
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Ehh.. I think it's okay. I could go with the change up :3 but I hope Vera finds love too D: it bothers me that she has no one now n.n
    May 3rd, 2013 at 10:18pm
  • Checkmate Joy

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    Still have the slightest hope that Andy'll not want to be with Roxy, but I guess it won't happen. Well, great story anyway. Don't let my nagging get in the way. I love this story and all, but I dunno, I get this horrible feeling reading it and it just makes me skim read. I dunno, but good luck!
    May 1st, 2013 at 10:04pm
  • Checkmate Joy

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    I really don't know what I feel about this now... ==; update soon.
    April 27th, 2013 at 09:38am
  • andybsgrapedog

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    Please update soon
    April 27th, 2013 at 05:47am
  • Checkmate Joy

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    Well it makes me want to continue to read now that Vera and Andy are getting involved.
    April 26th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • FreeRebel

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    update as soon as possible. it's awesomeee:D
    April 25th, 2013 at 08:52pm
  • lolbrittany

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    Update again!!!
    April 25th, 2013 at 08:13pm
  • Dickmcnugget

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    @ xLadySparrow
    I'll send you what I have so far, you can work off of it if you want.
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:18am