Help Wanted - Comments

@ Andlyv60.0
So to be clear... I am not allowed to write more until you posted whatever chapters you have?

@ xLadySparrow

You are best. Its that simple <3

@ lolbrittany
The ideas are starting to flow again! Updates will be more frequent!

@ Andlyv60.0
Pfft, you flatter me. <3

Gah the co author is perf <3

Ahhh please update again!

Your welcome

@ Darkprincess16
Thank-you for pointing that out. I'll remove one.

Why are chaper 24 and 25 the exact same chapter?

@ xLadySparrow
Please do and thank you very much.

@ Tsukisan
I will take your opinion into account and try to make Roxy less irritating. Haha. She has served her purpose in bringing a little drama into the story so now I can begin smoothing out her edges and making her fit in. :)

@ xLadySparrow
Ah, thank you. I understand what you mean. Please, take my opinion into account, but please do not let it begin to disturb and bother you. Ok? I still love to read updates, however reluctant I co to read Roxy's pov.

@ Tsukisan
Excellent point. Well, I will try to make my chapters better. :) I'm working on a new one right now... i keep rewriting it though because I think it sucks.

@ xLadySparrow
Yay! I'm not alone! And the chapters haven't been crap, but they could be better, but that same statement can go to pretty much any story in the world.

@ Tsukisan
Your opinion is your own and I appreciate you sharing it. I do aim to make sure my future chapters are more clear and informative rather than the crap they have been. I also hope to change your mind about Roxanne and show that she can fit in with this story and not just be there to cause drama. :)
It's alright, I have the same name prejudice about the name Katrina. Had a problem with Amanda as well for awhile until I met a couple awesome people with the name.

@ xLadySparrow
Ah thank you.
That explains a lot and is strongly excused. I didn't really take that into account, though you two writing it is a fair enough reason, but my opinion still stands.
This sounds really judgemental bed wrong I know, but I can't help but dislike the name Roxy. Also, a lot of the Roxys I have met in my life time... weren't the nicest of people. I used to think a similar thing about the name David, but one is a close friend now so, just a strange thing I guess.

@ Tsukisan
I understand I do appreciate you taking the time to actually give reason to the things you've said. Not many people do that without attacking the author. Four for you.
I think another part of the issue here is that I honestly have no idea where Angel was going with this and her and I have very different writing styles and ideas, so things get a little twisted and wonky. I was trying to get a smooth transition, but I guess that left out some details and clarity in my work. >_< I will admit though that Roxy's character was added to create a little drama because Angel and I had no idea where to take the story after a certain point. She's served her purpose so far. I'll work on getting the flaws banged out and hopefully get some character resolve here and get to a place where Roxy is an acceptable addition to the story and not just an annoying spec in the eyes of our readers.
On a side note, what's wrong with her name?

@ xLadySparrow
I understand that, but I guess its just who Veronica is. At my age, which is the same as hers, I wouldn't do... well pretty much any of the stuff she does in her situation. I get it, but I dunno. Fair enough Roxy has gone through some business and reacted the way she did, but how she reacts to her afterwards seems just... you know overboard? It's like she's made a big deal out of something tiny. I dunno, I just don't like her and her name just doesn't help. I just think she's a hindrance, which may be her actual purpose, but it's just how quickly everybody reacted. This is personal preference, so don't take it to heart. I just feel like the minute Veronica would say hey to Ashley, Andy would flip out at her. That's what I feel anyway.
From what I've read, Andy doesn't really love Veronica as much as he bonered from just seeing her or talking to her. How quickly he changes, I dunno.
Maybe Veronica just... isn't the brightest spark? And that Andy is a cow, Ashley is a man whore and Roxy is a speck of dirt.
That'd how I'll deal with it for a while.
(Again, this is personal preference ==;)

@ Andlyv60.0
I won't make you eat her!

@ Tsukisan
Sometimes it takes one person to make you realize that you're being stupid. We must remember Veronica is 16, Andy is 22. Roxy, even though it hasn't be previously stated, is 18 and slightly more mature than Vera. A lot of factors have gone into this and I will try my best to get a little more explanation and clarity in the coming chapters. Don't write us off just yet. :c

I prefer Veronica and Andy, they are both pretty cow like so they match. Also, Andy really liked her add was pretty obsessed with her, so suddenly wanting little with her, even for other reasons is pretty stupid. I love this story, but Roxy is making me reluctant to read it.

The coauthor is more responsible than I. The reason I havent updated is because I am not around a computer, its sort of hard on a phone. Your lovely coauthor will probably take over in such situations. As you can see, she is an amazing writer, so I trust her to take this story in any direction she chooses. P.s: I will eat Roxy if she gets mad about Andy and Vee talking. Dont make me eat her Kayla!