Saving Me - Comments

Love this story! Great job:) Are you thinking of updating any time soon??

@ Pandillero
Thanks for the comment! Actually, my first language and (sadly) only language is English, but once you said that I went back and reread this story...since it has been awhile and I now know where you got that impression from. I plan on fixing those mistakes this weekend...but I am glad you brought that up because I wouldn't have gone back and reread my story if you hadn't. I started before I had any real practice writing and recently I have gotten more (I'm on my school's paper).

Anyways, hopefully I will have a new chapter up before the end of the year!

Okay so this story is cute and packed with drama that is just so delicious. Some of the things you type make me believe that English isn't your first language, and that's alright.

The summary I feel just needs to be short and simple, but it didn't tak away from th story. OOOH! ADAM KNOWS HOW TO TREAT A WOMAN! He's such a cutie, and you've done a great job in capturing him :)

“She sure does know how to torture a man.” I smile, before closing the door.

Aw, yeah, gentlemen can feel the burn--so to speak--after all ;D

So I hope you update this soon! :)

Here from Le Comment Swap. Firstly, the layout is nice. It's easy to read, but I don't like the font you used. Also in the summary this cam up Watson out & are those supposed to be there or is it just an error? The chapters are so so long, I only read to the second because for one, I'm not a fan of who you're writing about, so it didn't really interest me all that much, and secondly, there was just so much text in every chapter! It a little tedious for me to read something so long. But all in all, I do think you have a good plot and you certainly wrote it very well. I'll say well done to you, dear.

@Yakitori Thanks for the comment! I'm actually playing with how I could add more depth in the characters...later in the story.

Ooh! I really liking this story. First off I love Adam Levine and I love the layout. I like how believable the story is and how you portrayed the characters. If anything, I would like to see more depth and dimension in the characters (both Ariel and Adam). They seem to lack a certain complexity that would really elevate your story from being plot driven to character driven.

@XoXHaysXoX I should have it up soon, I'm about half-way done with the next chapter!

I love it! Update soon?!?!

@apple20822 I'll try to get it up within the next two weeks. :)

Update!!
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@softball.dreamer Thanks! :)

Great Chapter!

@AnaShadows Thanks... Hopefully you won't be waiting too long. I wish I could say I'll have the next chapter up tonight, but I seriously doubt that, but if everything goes the way I want it to the next chapter will be up by next Sunday.

Uh. I usually like writing in detail about stories, always picking a point for the author to take the story to the next level because I like my commenters to do the same.

But damn. I loved this story and I am waiting for more!

Great story! Please update soon!!

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I must admit, I'm not a big fan of band fan fictions or anything of that sort, but I will admit that Adam Levine is damn right fine. The first chapter was long and slow in the beginning up until the whole sister and boyfriend cheating scandal part. It was really intense and I really enjoyed this story. As for the layout, it sort of hurts my eyes but I could care less. It was great!

Love it! Please update soon!!!

Another great update. I like the playful side. Well written, keep it up!

I thought the beginning between the mother and daughter bantering was amusing and reading their conversation you can relate, which also raises the question of ‘what did her sister do?’ Then you found out and it’s like…ah. Then the drama in the flashback and then between Chase and Adam in the 2nd chapter. I like the way you set the story up, how it moves, it’s really good. Not too long not too short, perfect chapter lengths. The descriptions are good, and it looks like it’s turning out to be a really good story so far. I can’t find anything wrong with it. Great writing, seriously, keep it up. I’ll be recommending the story.

Please continue, I love this story <3