The Everetts. - Comments

I’m here as the new host for ‘The Writing Contest’.

UGHGUHG I’ve always been so disappointed that you didn’t continue writing this because I was always so intrigued. I actually stopped myself from reading the first chapter for the longest time because I wanted there to be more. I knew the first chapter was going to hook me, and it did. It really, really did. I love the promise that this story has. It’s so dark and morbid and actually just messed up—a family of murderers that help each other—but I’m into it. I want it.

I love how you started the story, too. Just this chapter is great. I have a good grasp on the backstory even though I wasn’t really given this long, detailed version of it. And while she’s unnamed at the moment, I have a good grasp on the girl. She’s loyal and it shows in the final line about having to help Alek clean up. I only got a glimpse of your writing style, but just with that, it was simple but detailed and had a consistent flow. It was very enjoyable.

I hope you continue this one day!

Love the start of this story. Also, the layout is gorgeous.

oops, double comment

I read this while listening to Placebo on the soundtrack page. You probably wrote the first 2 chapters to go with the first two songs, but for some reason Placebo fit. I could picture the scene, with the song , quite perfectly. It could easily be seen as a movie, as well, that scene with the camera.

I love Bates Motel, too. So, this story will be exciting. Also, I love the title and layout.

okay, i am really looking forward to reading this.

This is interesting - Please do continue I look forward to reading more

Really awesome plot you've come up with, and very well-written introduction! I'm very excited to read the next chapters you post.

NORMAN FROM THE BATES MOTEL
NORMAN
MY BABY
NORMAN
i'm sobbing silently until you decide to update.
i'll leave you with that unsettling thought.
please update.
like now.
like RIGHT now.
please.
yes.

I'm really excited to read this!

Oooh, I can't wait to read this, you don't even understand.