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  • Fictional.Reality

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    Oh Matt isn't going to like this at all, whenever he finds out anyway. It maks me happy to know she isn't letting the rejection stopping her. I am really excited to know how the 'relationship' is gonna go.
    <3 Michele
    March 18th, 2013 at 06:07am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I really like this so far! Poor girl, that would be so awkward facing Matt afterbeing rejected like that... I'm glad she is moving on. I can't help but wonder what Matt will think though when he see's her at the club he attends with Nicholas, someone who is so high up in the ranks. Shits gunna get real for him I think. Lol
    March 18th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • shortygirl

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    Its good to see her happy and not upset about Matt. Though there friendship is probably going to be tense and awkward from now on.
    March 18th, 2013 at 05:35am
  • hachie

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    Wow reading the last part has really left me breathless! X3 But it seems that things between Matt and Paulina are crumbling because its very awkward and Paulina keeps getting hurt whenever she thinks of Matt and his supposed sub! I look forward to the next update!
    March 18th, 2013 at 05:20am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    Hugh or Liam Neeson
    March 15th, 2013 at 11:54pm
  • Nybabe96

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    I would suggest Thomas Gibson from Criminal Minds, totally radiates an "Alpha Male" guy when he plays his character Aaron Hotchner. UNF
    March 15th, 2013 at 02:53am
  • taken for a fool

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    the guy that played russell in new girl my god there is something about that man
    March 12th, 2013 at 10:00pm
  • Chels714

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    I've only come across this story tonight but am nonetheless excited to see where it goes.. As far as Nicholas may I suggest Stephen Moyer.. Something about his dominant side seems fitting
    March 12th, 2013 at 05:27am
  • femme fatale.

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    His words cut through ME like a knife. Sweet Jesus. Poor Paulina
    March 12th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Nm, I think Joe Manganiello is a better suggestion! I hope you update soon!
    March 12th, 2013 at 04:53am
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    Nm, I think Joe Manganiello is a better suggestion! I hope you update soon!
    March 12th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    David Boreanaz! I find him so hot for an older dude! And wow, I cant believe she just went for it like that. I was cringing while he was rejecting her, that was rough! I cant wait to see where you go with this! I love that Jimmy is in this too! Such a strong start. I cant wait for more:)
    March 12th, 2013 at 04:49am
  • soapy

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    AMAZING!
    i read this on the bus this morning and i was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sucked into it everything else just disappeared around me!
    so bummed he rejected her but he will regret it GREATLY! update again soon, this is following so wonderfully!
    March 12th, 2013 at 04:40am
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    mads mikkelsen? I mean he is older and to me HANDSOME! x3 Great Update!
    March 12th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • carpe-vengeance

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    Awesome update! To be honest when I read the Nicholas part I thought of Joe Manganiello, but Hugh Jackman is a very nice choice as well haha
    March 11th, 2013 at 09:56pm
  • thewolf.

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    Poor Paulina Cry
    You could always use Timothy Olyphant. He's a babe! Haha
    March 11th, 2013 at 09:13pm
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    How sad for Paulina :( But now she gets to put her skills on someone else! Can't sense which direction this story is going, and I love it!
    March 11th, 2013 at 08:26pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    poor Paulina...that must have been hard for her to hear after all the training she got to impress Matt just to hear her reject her offer. :(
    I can't wait for the next one.
    March 11th, 2013 at 08:11pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Oh p.s. When you started describing what Nicholas looked like for whatever reason I thought of George Clooney, even though he is 20 years older than Matt.
    March 11th, 2013 at 08:04pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Oh p.s. When you started describing what Nicholas looked like for whatever reason I thought of George Clooney, even though he is 20 years older than Matt.
    March 11th, 2013 at 08:04pm