Bells Ringing in the Summer Haze - Comments

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Hey guys, I'm sure most of you have dropped this story, which is fine! I am going through and see if I can keep writing. I lost all my notes on this. Life has been crazy in the past year!

I seriously need to keep up with the new chapters. Every time I click back on this story, there's more updates. Well if I don't keep up, then I'll have more to read in one sitting, which means more to comment on!

“Well I wanted to start off with I’m sorry,” she looked up and raised an eyebrow.
I just wanted to say, after reading the ninth chapter again, that this should be two sentences. Instead of a comma before the end quotation mark, it should be a period, meaning that she should be capitalized.

Oh my goodness. Why does Nora have to be so frustrating? She is making everything janky in her relationship with Isaac. Seriously. Can I just lock Nora and Isaac in a room together where they can live happily ever after? CAUSE THAT'S WHAT NEEDS TO HAPPEN.

Awwww, that chapter was perfectly cute! Nora's going to catch the flowers! I hope Isaac sees it! ;D

Happy birthday! (:

They should just be together ;) I love how Nora's and Val's friendship grows with every chapter! This story is just too cute :)

I seriously love the end of the eighth chapter. Oh goodness. It was so adorable! I was smiling as soon as the two got into the car. I had a good feeling that something like this was going to happen, and I'm glad he finally told her his feelings for her.

Oh gosh. The end of chapter nine made me want to yell. WHY CAN'T SHE JUST LOVE HIM?? Totally crying now.

awwww :3

Btw, I've already been subscribed, obviously, lol. But I soooo just recommended this story!!

Btw, I've already been subscribed, obviously, lol. But I soooo just recommended this story!!

Okay, I love this story! I've begun to picture Isaac looking like Wade from the CWTV tv show Hart of Dixie. Lol. :P Is that weird? He's just started to remind me of him tonight. :P Anyways, great story, I'm sorry for being a silent reader. :) I can't wait to read more. :) Great job and writing skills.

~ Marly

I come back from my trip to find five new chapters to this story! Amazing how you can update this story so many times in a short period. I could never dream of cranking out new chapters in a week.

Brianna had long brown hair, which went to her mid bag, her curly hair made Nora envious.
I found a mistake in chapter four that I felt the need to point out. I think bag should be back.

“What about a new watch?” she titled her head and nodded.
She should be capitalized since it is a new sentence, well from what I can tell it's a new sentence. (I found this in chapter five)

One thing I noticed while I was reading the new amazing chapters is that you incorporated Nora and Isaac's job into the story subtly, with a few remarks about it or chapters with them (mostly Nora) at their job, resolving problems or just doing what they normally do. I've always been the type of person who is interested in characters every day lives, especially jobs, so I really like how you mentioned what they do for a living and how you constantly mention them in the story.

I also love the relationships between the characters, both Nora and Valerie and between Nora and Isaac. The sisterly, best friend relationship between Nora and Val is just so close, and I sometimes forget they they're cousins and not sisters. And the cute relationship between Isaac and Nora leaves me smiling. I can tell that they are beginning to like the other, but don't show it to anyone, even going so far as trying to convince themselves that they don't like each other. Oh goodness. It's the kind of relationship that I really love!

The last thing that I have noticed that I enjoy about this story is that the story focuses on more than one thing - both Val's wedding and Isaac and Nora's always growing relationship. Both are just so cute and wonderful. Oh, one more thing. I love how you make a scene about all the things that go into planning a wedding (cake tasting, dress shopping, gift shopping, etc). It makes the story much more realistic and, I found, helps me connect to the characters themselves. It feels like I'm watching a movie or right there with the characters, watching them as they plan everything. I really love that feeling.

Okay, I swear I'm finished. This is such an amazing story, I can't help but mention everything that I love about it. I just love this story so much!

I'm looking forward to the exciting things to start coming!

I like how Nora and Val are such good friends. Nora should just face it Isaac and her are going to fall in love! ;) I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work.

this seems very cute! (:

When I started reading this I automatically thought of Nicholas Sparks, that's a good thing though! I love the way you wrote this, it's so cute and wonderful. Keep up the good work and update soon. :)

I was looking through the story list, looking for something interesting to read, and the short description really caught my attention. Just reading the short description, about a wedding, made me think that this story was going to be a cute story. And by reading the summary, I was right. I really love how instead of describing the plot of the story, you put in a flashback of, I'm assuming, the two main characters when they were children. It really made me smile because you really captured the emotions of a child and the way children speak in just a short little excerpt.

“It’s perfect,” looking over at her cousin, Nora smiled.
This sentence, I think, should be two sentences. Instead of having a comma after perfect, it could be replaced with a period, meaning that looking would be capitalized.

I just want to say that I really like this story, even though it is only one chapter long. I have a really good feeling that this story is going to be wonderful and cute, which I really love in stories. I am definitely going to subscribe to this story because it is just so awesome, and I want to see what happens next.

Great start so far! Can't wait to read more :)