Time After Time - Comments

What was the note for? Or when/why did he give it go her? I honestly can't remember

Amazing chapter
Update soon
Can't wait to read what happens
I hope things out with Brian and her

I love this story :)
Update soon
Can't wait to find out what happens :)
When they get together?

I started reading this story yesterday and omg how I'm loving it... I just love brian's and kay's friendship and this love hanging in the air is adorable! really love it! can't wait for the next update!!

Interesting. I like it. You're really doing a nice job with this. Looking forward to the next chapter!

You just created a few interesting possibilities for some storylines. I'm not even going to try to anticipate where these may go. This just sets the hook even more firmly - there's no way I can stop reading now!

Wow, not sure what to think of Margie just turning up and being nice. She was such a bitch before I'm kinda thinking that she's spying for her brother.

Oh my god I am still laughing about Brian strapped to the bus with duct tape, with his perfect hair blowing in the wind hahahahahaha. I have the best visual image ever.

Ooh, weird how her Dad would have her as his medical contact but they haven't spoken in years.

@ StarxDust= Rant away:) It more than likely influences what I write.

@ cowbird69=You are not the only one that wants to do that! But, I made a promise to myself that I wouldn't speed it up in ways I've read before. I want it to be somewhat believable!

@ Tickle Me Sara= thank you!

@ gothique4= Haha... I'll let you come to your own conclusions so then you can tell me what you're thinking!

This is killing me!! When is Bry getting back? Lol!

I'm being impatient :L but patience is a vertue as they say..
And in ever other story I've read where they date in a chapter or two someone cheats... Or some other kind if drama like an ex or one night stand being preggers pops up. Maybe with the 'taking it slow approach ' that wouldn't happen? Can you imagine if it does! :O I think I'd shit my pants xD there perfect got each other.... I really hope no drama follows : P

Aaaaand I'm ranting aren't I? I'll just end it here... :)

Thank you for the accelerated update! What a level-headed, easy-does-it character you've created with Kay. I am enjoying the slow approach she's taking with the possible relationship shift with Brian, but I have to admit that I'd like to smack her in the head - I would've jumped that man's bones four or five chapters ago!

I love this story!

Well thank god something seems to have gotten into her bonehead skull lol. Whooo hooo for not sugar coating anything.

Is she slowly coming around and pulling her head out of her ass? Oh my lord I hope she is, otherwise she's going to fuck it all up.

@ vampire.money =Thank you :) I love long chapters also and I really wanted to write something that could be somewhat realistic and I hope I've done that so far.

@ StarxDust = I hope Chapter 11 can clear some things up for you... on Kay's end, anyway.

@ cowbird69 = haha I need some kicks in life, geez... :) Updated early, as asked! :D

I love this story. It's great how you haven't just jumped into it all too quickly. I also love the long chapters! You're doing such a good job with writing this :)

I don't understand why Kay is so confused.. Obviously she loves him.
Uhmmm... What us Mel hiding? Is she like preggers or something?
As for Brian I thought that he would be relaxed because he knows Kay loves him because when they were arguing she snuggled into him.... Uhm, boy was I wrong.
I do enjoy this slow paced story compared to the hundreds of faster paved ones I've read, If that makes sense.

I like the slow approach - you don't read stories that take things one step at a time too often. But I'm hating you for hinting at Mel's issue without a big reveal!! Update soon, please!

@ VRose = Your comment made my day... week, and made writing Chapter 10 so much harder. Thank you :)

@ gothique4 = This story can't have the perfect moment in chapter 9.. there'd be nothing left to write about after that haha

See, I missed out on that excitement! I just went to their side show!

@ StarxDust = I'm glad you liked the chapter!

I'm hoping that I can make the break end well.. but time will soon tell!

Ahh :) loooovvvveeeddd iiittt!!
I think the time apart will be good for them, Bry can relax will Kay thinks.
There's just something about this chapter I adore... And I'm not sure what..

I just love this chapter but I really feel like grabbing Kay's shoulders and shaking her until her head falls off. She has the most wonderful man in the world in love with her but she's still got her head shoved up her own ass.

I saw Bullet this week too and they were awesome, plus I got to drool over Corey Taylor :-) I could do without the killer sunburn though lol

Wow.. That was a brilliant well written chapter! Hope to see more soon =)