Time After Time - Comments

They are waaayyy too cute together... Why can't Bri just tell her? He needs to be like over the top romantic then tell her :O ahh!! ^_^ buuuut I think she'd freak out a bit like she was at the end of this one. Maybe she needs to come to the realization she loves him first? Uhmmmm .... Eh idk :P can't wait till the next chapter :)

@ StarxDust- WOW! That is dedication :) Thank you! This comment made my day! I hope Ch8 gives you the insight you were after :)

@ gothique4- :D So am I! He deserved more, though. I couldn't very well have him with someone likeable.. He doesn't deserve that!

@ Red Lyte- Thank you :) I couldn't make it perfect. There would be hardly any of the story left if I did.

I love this story! Even if it did take me hours to read... Literally from 11:30pm-4am to read 7 chapters - but it was worth it :P
I want to know Kay's reaction to the kiss like her thoughts... Eekk!! Can't wait till the next chapter ^_^

I'm so happy that Brian smacked Justin into next week. He would definitely win "Tool Of The Week". He's just pissed because he didn't get his own way. I had to laugh that he's stuck with an absolute fucktard like Olivia though lol.

Oh man he had the perfect opportunity to tell her how he felt and he blew it again :-(

Ok so I'm glad Brian punched the douche bag cause he totally deserved it. But what I'm so excited about is the kiss. Ok so it's not the perfect kiss and he didn't profess his love. It's still something. I seriously love this story and every chapter makes me love it more! I can't wait for the next update :)

I bet its Justin. If it is I hope Brian knocks him out! The date was really cute though. I also loved the whole spa experience. The fact that even though Brian didn't want to be there he stayed for her. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

@ Red Lyte

I'm Glad you like it so much. :)

@ gothique4

I needed a way for it (the shower scene) to happen and that’s what came out. Slipping in the shower is awkward as shit... Just have to hope that no one’s around to witness it!
What was up with his arms? Well you’ll find out eventually :P
Haha.. That would have been hilarious. News Headliner... Zacky V Arrested for Indecently Exposing Himself to a Crazed Fan. Her Virtue is Now in Question…

Your comments made my day! Thank you! :)

“What, no edible M&M undies? Kay, I’m disappointed,” Hahahaha this is such a typical Brian thing to say.

Ooh almost stacking it in the shower is not funny - I've almost done that myself and for that split second you look like a complete spaz lol

Love how tongue tied Brian got and just stood there and stared at her. Hmmm wondering what he was up to with his arms - I'm kinda thinking he was trying to get rid of the massive boner at seeing Kay naked.

Oh lord Zacky got busted dancing butt ass naked. Just as well it wasn't Kate or he may have been molested :p

Wow. I seriously love this story so far. The bathroom part was funny. the characters are great. just everything about this is amazing. I can't wait for another update!

@ gothique4
There's just something about Chocolate, huh! haha.
JC went a little too far, yeah. But it was necessary for Chapter 5 and the coming chapters.
What's the big bad secret? Well, you can speculate- it will be revealed eventually..
I'm glad you like something that came so sporadically to my mind one day. This story is my baby, I guess. I've never put so much care into something I have written just for fun. The Uni break has allowed me time to blow off some steam! So thank you!
Stay tuned.. it's warming up!

I love this chapter and damn all of them were so cute in M & M World. I was like that in a chocolate factory I found while I was on holiday last year. I think I spent about $100 just on chocolate lol

Ooh Johnny is a little shit isn't he?

So when's Brian going to admit to her that he's in love love with her, as I have a feeling that this is the big bad secret and all the guys know but don't think it's their place to tell her.

“oops, I made the Grizzly Bear angry, I best skedaddle,” Hahahahaha I can so picture Jimmy doing this lol

Can't wait to read more. I love this story :-)

I really like your story so far... I feel like a lil' something something might happen between Kay and Brian soon, they are so cute together!

I like it. I think you've made a pretty good picture of what they're actually like. Enjoying it!

Damn her ex is an out and out dirtbag. As much as it hurts I'm glad that she found out before she found herself stuck married to the dude.

Oh lord, the guys are hilarious in this. They're like a bunch of little kids :-)

I'm really loving this so far and looking forward to reading more :-)