Broadening Horizons. - Comments

LunaTheHouse-elf (100)

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@ Tragic_Ending
Thank you again! I'm actually surprised at how well this turned out,usually there are a few awkwardly written sentences or I write a few that don't make sense...

January 25th, 2013 at 03:01am

Tragic_Ending (100)

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@ LunaTheHouse-elf
You did really good, like I said, you have great potential. Just keep writing, and reading, and you'll be amazing, I know it. The detail was just right, it was great, I really could put myself in the situation, which is what you want to do as a writer.

January 25th, 2013 at 02:30am

LunaTheHouse-elf (100)

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@ Tragic_Ending
Thank you! Do you really think my writing is good? I tried to take your advice about being descriptive, I hope I didn't give too many details.

January 24th, 2013 at 10:23pm

Tragic_Ending (100)

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Hey, it's Imagine All Time Low band and crew from tumblr! Finally just finished reading this, sorry it's been awhile, I've been uber busy. Anywho, this is really good. Your writing has very good potential. I'm definitely subscribing and recommending! (: Keep up the good work, love.

January 24th, 2013 at 07:28pm