Broadening Horizons. - Comments

@ Tragic_Ending
Thank you again! I'm actually surprised at how well this turned out,usually there are a few awkwardly written sentences or I write a few that don't make sense...

@ LunaTheHouse-elf
You did really good, like I said, you have great potential. Just keep writing, and reading, and you'll be amazing, I know it. The detail was just right, it was great, I really could put myself in the situation, which is what you want to do as a writer.

@ Tragic_Ending
Thank you! Do you really think my writing is good? I tried to take your advice about being descriptive, I hope I didn't give too many details.

Hey, it's Imagine All Time Low band and crew from tumblr! Finally just finished reading this, sorry it's been awhile, I've been uber busy. Anywho, this is really good. Your writing has very good potential. I'm definitely subscribing and recommending! (: Keep up the good work, love.