@ Angelus91 It's four of us writing it xD If you have specific editorial correction to make, could you specify which chapters need it? Or if they all do, say so. Each character (labeled in the chapter description) is written by a different person.
I like the background, the content box should be smaller so the words aren't stretched out. The banner is cool and I like it! You have talent in writing and it really shows in this piece of work. Maybe make your chapters a little bit longer is what I have to say.
It's four of us writing it xD If you have specific editorial correction to make, could you specify which chapters need it? Or if they all do, say so. Each character (labeled in the chapter description) is written by a different person.