Treading Slowly - Comments

Please don't give up on this, this is the best Ziall on here :(

I seriously think your stories deserve more attention! Even though I don't generally like slash stories but I am in love with your writings. You are seriously talented.

I'm so glad they're "together" now!!!!! *squeals in happiness*

THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I'm in love with this chapter, seriously. The beginning is a bit confusing because it's not clear when Niall decided to cut things off with Zayn after Liam had the talk with him. But it was beautifully written, nonetheless.

And I love the side pairing of Larry. I'm glad Louis can be happy for a bit and that Zayn has gotten Harry to actually look at his and Louis' relationship, as well as getting a peek at what he thought about their relationship.

Oh Perrie. I feel so bad for her. Did Zayn really just leave her there without an explanation? I was hoping Zayn spotted Niall. I was kind of afraid that something was going to happen between the two, but I really like how you totally didn't make Perrie out to be a total bitch.

And THAT ENDING. I CAN'T. I wish there could have been some description, like the last chapter, but I'm just really happy that Niall is letting him in.

I can't wait to see more of what's going on in Niall's life and what happens next!

Okay, so I secretly re-read this story all the time and I just felt I had to comment again.

I loved how you opened up the third chapter with Zayn blurting out that he had sex with Niall. It was just perfect. And I loved the little Zouis time (do NOT get any ideas from that, please. Zouis in this story would hurt too much XD ) I loved how you portrayed Harry as this free spirit who seems like he has no idea of the effect he has on Louis, or if he does, he really can't help himself. And then back to Zayn and Niall's relationship. It's just perfect. I'm so totally in love with Niall's character it isn't funny anymore. I can't even begin to describe why either. My favorite part was them at Retro World. He's just so real. And Zayn's character plays off of Niall's so well. I like how you kind of killed Zayn's 'golden boy' expectations with that Harry poster incident. It's refreshing to see a character think twice or question the other for a moment, especially when they're at the stage where they're setting expectations like Zayn is doing. I think that'll hinder him from doing that again in the future, but not for the bad if you get what I mean.

And the scene. Just perfect. I expect LOTS more to come, okay? You don't even know.

Plus, I'm excited to see how the date goes. I'm wondering if Niall will keep him at a distance with the sex. I can see Niall trying to keep it sexual to put distance but in the end they just get drawn closer. Or I hope that's what happens XD

I really wish I could have seen how the first version of this story would have panned out, but this version has stolen a piece of my heart as well, and I don't regret missing out on the first one (as much XD) :)

This story is wonderful :')

Awwww! They're going on a date! This is one of the beat fanfics I've ever read! I really cannot wait for more! You are such a good writer and I hope this continues:)

This story is just too amazing. I love it so far and I can't wait to see Niall and Zayn's relationship develop more. :3

Oh my goodness!! I love this! It's so beautifully written! I hope there is more soon:$

I haven't read the whole chapter yet (I usually read ANs first, that's why XD) What's ao3? Sorry, I'm kind of curious :3

Oh god this is already great dqweyrgwert.

@ iJigglyPuff
Being completely revamped. The page-number count is in the status at the top of the page.

did this story get deleted or something? ._.

i love this its too good

cute cute zayn's too cute.

OH GOD THAT GIF. WITH ZAYN LOOKING AT NIALL. MY HEART.

More, jesus.

I am so in love with this. I need more! Update whenever possible please(((:

He didn't want to really live today.
my feelings exactly. Zayn is like so perf. Poor Perrie, still doesn't know anything, tsk, tsk.

I'm so torn, because Perrie sounds like a sweetheart, she really does but I have a really bad feeling about this. I feel like she'll be shagging some guy when he walks in - is that too cliche of a prediction? NIALL WHY DIDN"T YOU MAKE HIM STAY GOSHDARN IT.
ugh. the ziall feels continue~