Treading Slowly - Comments

Zayn, what're you doing? Zayn, STAHP!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a terrible person, cause I hope she doesn't take him back. But she probably will...

I actually don't read slash that much or even 1D slash
but omg you're writing is so perfect. Do you even realize how beautiful this is? ::Cries:
poor perrie though :/

ziall ziall ziall.

I love this, no lie, holy crap Ziall feels.
::cries:

@ AHLICE
It's totally fine, my friend thought it was Pierre too, but what was worse, she actually thought she was a guy XD

@ she's so high.
1D wiki said Pierre goddamn it. thanks for letting me know!

I'm not through the second chapter yet, but I'm sorry, I have to point this out. It's Perrie, not Pierre. Again, I'm sorry.

I love the story so far, and Ziall is my favorite paring, so I'll get back to you with another comment after I finish the second chapter. ^.^