Sweet Dreams, Hannah - Comments

@ lipslam
Thank you! I'm going to try. I had a couple of chapters typed up on my laptop, but it completely crashed the other day, so now I have to start from scratch ):

@ jaseykay
Thank you so much! I'm hoping I can ! (:

Holy fuck this story is soooo good. Please continue it!

I've just subscribed. Hoping ever so strongly that you carry this story until it's finished. It's definitely a page-turner.

Hello my subscribers! I am so sorry it's taken me so long to reply! School has let out now, and in preparation for college over the summer I am going to be writing more chapters! (: once again, I apologize for the disappearing act there. Can't wait for all of you to read more!

Woah O.o I'm So Happy She's Not Dead & He Got To Read The Emails ! & I Don't Like His Mom Very Much -_-

Yay!!!! im sooo happy he finally red the email!!!!! i hope he is able to get out and see her and his mother is crazy!!!!!

I thought I wouldn't be surprised again, but, of course, I was wrong. There are more suspensions coming on this chapter and I like it. Hannah got hurt, I, as a reader, get to know what happened between Zachary and his parents (what's with his mother, though?). AND HELL YES HE FINALLY READ ALL HANNAH'S EMAIL.

This is going to great. I can't wait for the next chapter.

@ LilMoe11
Hello!

Thank you so much for your interest in my story (:
I really appreciate all of the positive feedback.

I just updated. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

For Starters , I Love This Story !(((:
& OH MY GOD . Didn't Expect Tht At The End . Is Hannah Gonna Be Okay ?! Why Would Zack Try To Kill Himself Over Her ? What'd She Do !? & I Wonder What The Circles Mean ..
Pleaseeeee Update Soon . !

@ SummerSunshine

Once again, I really enjoy reading everyone's reviews. They make me feel accomplished, somehow: like I touched the literary hearts of the individuals who can relate to my symbolisim (:

I'm really glad that you enjoyed the new chapter. I have big plans for this story.

Ahhh, you were sleepy! That's alright, though. I'm pretty sure I made a considerable amount of grammar mistake as well since I usually write, well, midnight. I'm also pretty sure that I probably make more mistake than you. (English is not my first language.)

I really like the new chapter. And how you brought us throughout the story. In the beginning, I was like, "Wait, what, he's alive?"

And then she met his mother somehow, but her mother said... well, things that sounds nonsensical to me. Why on earth is Hannah is the reason of Zachary's suicide? Zachary's mother doesn't even want to tell her!

Oh, all this suspension... you're building it up nicely. First, he was dead. Then he left will. Then he guided Hannah. Then he wasn't dead. And then his mom said Hannah's the reason of his suicide.

This is brilliant.

Update soon!

@ryan.berch

Why, thank you so much! ! (: I really hoped to convey how much of this deeply hurts her, through words.

I see I have succeeded.

Thanks again.

That was beautiful! i can fell the pain Hanna is feeling i love the way you write! :)

@ ryan.berch
Thank you so much !!! (:

@ SummerSunshine

I really appreciate you taking the time to write such meaningful reviews. Believe me, I love reading them.

I like the way you think(: And thank you for the compliments on my writing technique.

As far as grammar. I'm a big grammar nazi. However, it was 1am when i was writing the update. I was a bit tired xD haha.

I'm really hoping to one day get this published, when it is finished. Thats why I'm putting it online. I want to know if people like it/would read it. I normally don't put my stories online, due to fear that someone will steal it. however, I want to get it known, and I felt this was the only way.

Thank you (:

I love this story its so sweet! i cant wait 2 know what the circles are!!!!

Good update. You expand the story slowly and put in little surprises when things doesn't go as well as Hannah expected. I like it. I can't stop wondering whether Zachary is actually still alive or dead but he's guiding Hannah somehow to uncover... whatever that is. Just take your time in writing this. Sometimes, the best way to write is to step back and let your writing "cool down" for a while before you take a look at them and trying to read them as someone else (which will give you a lot of self-evaluation).

Anyway, I think you initially wants to write "your" instead of "you're" on sentences like "You’re room is nice". I know it's little things, it's just grammar, but people achieve great things by doing little things correctly, don't you think?

@ SummerSunshine
Thank you. That was very in depth, and it made me analyze my own writing a bit more. Thank you for taking the time to write this. I appreciate it dearly. I am very happy, once again, that someone made a person connection/relation to my story.

Thank you.

I just finished chapter two, actually.
Posting it now (:

I think your writing and your plot are really interesting. You use fair amount of interesting words (well, at least for me) and you also put that little thing that I like from a lot of great writer; something that people can relate. You can relate when a writer wrote about how the character's stomach feels like it has butterfly in it when they're in love, and I can relate when you wrote about how the screeching sound of the car that Zachary drove that day always and always reminds Hannah about the day he took away his life. I also have sounds that I recognize and don't like and they remind me of things, little things, big things. I think it's important to have things like that in a story.

Keep up the good job.

@ ryan.berch
Thank you so much! I can't even begin to explain how you're comment made my night (: your reaction to the prologue, and the story itself, is exactly what I'm trying to elict from my readers. Not saying I was trying to make you cry, thats horrible! Haha. I mean that you made an emotional connection, and that is wonderful.

Thank you for commenting.

I'm going to start writing more, right now (: