An Unchecked Love Story - Comments

Well maybe you could try to do an outline or brainstorm for the story. never tried it myself, but other authors/friends of mine say that it helps a lot to write down and know where your going. I just write notes when I want to stop writing so I know where I'm going for the next chapter. Hope something helps so you can write more. lol :D Chapter was great.

Wow, haven't been on in a long time, really glad to read another chapter. Update soon, it was really good, story's going well, though I can see how it's hard to figure out where to go from there. Hope you figure it out soon though. :D

oh mah gawd i love it totally subscribes. keep up the great work. maybe they could run away together or something that would be cool. heehee

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oh mah gawd dont stop writing please i love it! heehee

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i really like mthis story :) keep it up man..

i really like this story keep it up.

The story started out nicely, I like how you fit everything into the story and how things happened, like in the new chapter with Auden and his werewolf grandma. so bravo. lol

love it hun u should finish it.... but only if u want to lol.

o.k. not sure if this is where I'm supposed to be writing comments but whatever. The story is really cool, I thought you were making it exactly like Twilight but changing Edwards name, but once it got to chapter 5 i think, that's when I was really interested in reading it. Pretty good so far, hope you don't stop writing it since you wrote that in one of the chapters. Just wanted to say I liked the story so far. O.k. take care, laters. :d

this story is ver y good keep writing and update soon

I love thi story! You have serious writing skills! Keep up on the writing!! =]

don't stop writing this!
i will personally find out where you live, sneak into your house, and make you finish it!
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no hun u should, finish it. i love reading your stories. lol love you.

*Fangurl Squeak*
Ohmygoodness...
I loved it.
Im in love with this story.
LoVeLoVeLoVe.

&the layout and song fit with your story wonderfully.
(:

*Clicks the subsribe button.*
Yay.

awww thats so sad i wonder why that cant see each other anymore? lol. well great update hun.=]

another great update hun.

Aww lovely chapter~<3

love the ending of chapter 3

MMM still hooked!!

thanks guys :] tehe fluff . i will update soon [: