An Unchecked Love Story - Comments, page 2

love.the.paranormal. (100)

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I love it so far!!
it's really great
update it soon please!
:)

April 24th, 2008 at 01:59am

Lothrop. (100)

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loved the updates hun=]

April 24th, 2008 at 12:46am

Rooberri (100)

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Aww i liked these first few chapters they were really sweet 8D
lol fluff the Dog~<33
Update soon?

April 23rd, 2008 at 11:19pm

Lothrop. (100)

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this is rly good so far sopheap. and i know this is gonna sound stupid but i loved that u named the dog fluff lmao. so cute. anways cannot wait for the next update hun=]

April 23rd, 2008 at 02:22am

Fallon Young (100)

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well i do like the way the story has started and i can see why you have said that there are quite a few direction that are open to you. if i may point out there are one or two editing blopses othere than that, i really enjoyed the read and am looking forward to the nex installment.

April 22nd, 2008 at 08:55pm