An Unchecked Love Story - Comments

  • love.the.paranormal.

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    I love it so far!!
    it's really great
    update it soon please!
    :)
    April 24th, 2008 at 01:59am
  • Lothrop.

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    loved the updates hun=]
    April 24th, 2008 at 12:46am
  • Rooberri

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    Aww i liked these first few chapters they were really sweet 8D
    lol fluff the Dog~<33
    Update soon?
    April 23rd, 2008 at 11:19pm
  • Lothrop.

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    this is rly good so far sopheap. and i know this is gonna sound stupid but i loved that u named the dog fluff lmao. so cute. anways cannot wait for the next update hun=]
    April 23rd, 2008 at 02:22am
  • Fallon Young

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    well i do like the way the story has started and i can see why you have said that there are quite a few direction that are open to you. if i may point out there are one or two editing blopses othere than that, i really enjoyed the read and am looking forward to the nex installment.
    April 22nd, 2008 at 08:55pm