Oh Hell no. I don't think so. I sincerely hope someone, anyone, walks in at that moment and stops him. Brian is extremely upset and emotional; he doesn't know what he's doing, as much as he believes he does. Once again, you've left me needing more. Knowing what I know, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
I agree with the comment above. Don't let her die :( Apart from that really sad bit, the whole story is f*cking amazing! I've enjoyed every single bit of it :)
Damn you, Amanda. You have, once again, made me feel the emotions of the characters in this story. I definitely do NOT like the emotions in this chapter. Fucking crying at 11:30 in the morning isn't how I wanted to start my morning. Despite the tears still running down my face, I absolutely LOVE you and your writing. You've done an amazing job, as you always do. Don't keep me in suspense too long, though.
Noooooooooo! This was a very good in the way it was written, but not in the contents for me. I can't believe this is happening and I'm going to need some sort of relief from the downer this put on my day.
You know you have a good story when the readers are actually shocked with sudden emotions, and they can't seem to stop them. When you feel exactly how the characters feel, or cry when the characters cry, and laugh if something funny or happy happens, then you know you've done an amazing job.
i really really do not want that chapter to be "real" Brian needs to be dreaming or a merical needs to happen and she needs to recover it takes a lot to make me cry & this did it
Please please tell me that this chapter was just a dream oh my gosh I'm really really hoping this isn't real this chapter actually made me cry it was so sad I'm hoping there's an alternate or something. It's so depressing when the main character dies ugh!! But I love the story
Oh no. NO NO NO NO NO. I hope you understand the meaning of that word, because Abby can absolutely NOT lose that baby. I need to know what happens, damn it. Update soon, or I just might die of anxiety.
Due to our telepathy and the fact that you and I seem to be very privy to each others' stories, I knew I had nothing to worry about concerning Brian cheating with Michelle. There was still that sense of relief when he explained himself, though. I felt Abby's tension myself throughout the whole chapter. Love ya babe, and I love this story. I cannot wait for the end of this story, and then the sequel :)
Once again, you've left me needing more. Knowing what I know, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.