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  • laredo.

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    First of all, this is extremely creative. I have never seen a story that deals with Catfish before, and immediately I wanted to see what you could do with it.

    Okay, I have to say the idea of them as a relationship was a bit cheesy. The prologue with "Sweet Dreams" made me cringe, but I'm not a romantic and I'm kind of heartless, but I bet One Direction fans were all over that.

    Like I said before, I did like the idea of the story and I kind of giggled when Nev and Max got into it. It's interesting that he's kind of doing the catfishing, and lying to her.

    As always, the story is spotless and there are no errors anywhere. Your writing is spectacular. I think your One Direction fanfiction is the only One Direction fanfiction I will ever actually enjoy reading. tehe
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • vices

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    JSYK I SLEEP NAKED
    GIRL
    YOU CAN'T JUST END A STORY WITH LIAM SAYING THAT DO YOU KNOW WHAT THINGS LIKE THAT DO TO A GIRL
    FUCK
    but omfg
    this story asdjfhlaskjdchl I LOVE IT
    August 14th, 2013 at 08:29am
  • Jessica Styles

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    I love that happy ending <3
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:31pm
  • pelican park.

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    That was adorable! I'm so sad this is over but that was prefect!
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:29pm
  • iva marie

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    They got their happily ever after (:
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:27pm
  • political jargin

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    awww wittle beebees
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:26pm
  • katie bug

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    Yesyesyes. They're so presh(:
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:25pm
  • dynamite.

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    I loved that ending so much Cute
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:23pm
  • dancer

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    That was just perfect(:
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:21pm
  • clarity;

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    what a precious ending! I loved it :)
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:17pm
  • thewolf.

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    Oh my gosh, what a perfectly cute ending to a wonderful story!
    You are such a wonderful writer and this was lovely! That ending was too presh!
    August 13th, 2013 at 04:15am
  • bxgurl95

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    That story was cute and perfect and everything :)
    August 13th, 2013 at 03:23am
  • Anchor and Hope.

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    Seriously though.
    The ending was so perfect.
    I just loved this whole thing, but I'm gonna miss Liam & Penny. Cry
    August 13th, 2013 at 02:29am
  • fangirl.

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    I ship them. Nevermind that Penelope is fictional. xD
    They're adorable together, though. And I honestly loved this so I'm sad to see there's only one chapter left. But I'm not so upset because your other works are equally amazing. I can't wait for the next one :)
    August 11th, 2013 at 09:19pm
  • luke ham ham.

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    Love this! They are too cute for words <3
    Only one more chapter left? :( I love this so much.
    Can't wait for the next one!!! :D
    August 11th, 2013 at 06:57am
  • dolce and gabbana

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    WHHHATTTT
    August 10th, 2013 at 11:23pm
  • champagne sky

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    One more chapter?! I'm gonna cry!!
    August 10th, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • Mogar.

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW T-T THEY ARE SO CUTE, OMFG!

    No, one chapters? You can NOT end this Maddi. IT MUST GO FOREVER, MY LOVE. FOREVERRRR!
    August 8th, 2013 at 06:54am
  • vices

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    AW LENELOPE / PENELIAM U STOP THAT RIGHT NOW U CUTIES
    August 8th, 2013 at 03:33am
  • Katie Mosing

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    Oh my goodness, one more chapter?! I'll cry Cry
    August 6th, 2013 at 10:58pm
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