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  • sharpshootyourtoews

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    This was one of the saddest parts. How will Viktor react when Jane's dad comes out of jail? Oh oh oh can't wait to read more!
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:37am
  • sabrini98_

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    Oh my gosh it made me cry a lil bit.
    March 29th, 2013 at 02:03am
  • Kaly18

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    Glad she is finally going to talk
    March 21st, 2013 at 09:12pm
  • MMM26

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    Hurry up! Haha! I wanna hear the story!
    March 21st, 2013 at 05:10am
  • FLSweet82

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    i like the new chapter
    March 21st, 2013 at 03:43am
  • sharpshootyourtoews

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    Wow. Love this chapter! Viktor is the perfect gentleman and he treats her right!
    March 21st, 2013 at 02:40am
  • pogo5176

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    I know you said that this isn't your best work, but really it was written perfectly for what you were trying to get at, especially at the end when he says "only if you want to" about opening up about her scars. he made her feel beautiful and it was written perfect.
    March 21st, 2013 at 01:47am
  • slumflower

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    I love this! The only thing is that it's hard to read when all the paragraphs are squished together with no spaces entered inbetween. Other than that, I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm pretty sure I figured out the story behind her scars but I want to see what happens when Viktor finds out.
    March 17th, 2013 at 11:18pm
  • slumflower

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    I love this! The only thing is that it's hard to read when all the paragraphs are squished together with no spaces entered inbetween. Other than that, I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm pretty sure I figured out the story behind her scars but I want to see what happens when Viktor finds out.
    March 17th, 2013 at 11:18pm
  • AshleyVC88

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    Woohoo!!!! Sexy time!! Mr. Green
    March 15th, 2013 at 06:07pm
  • FLSweet82

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    love the new chapter
    March 12th, 2013 at 04:49am
  • minasahra

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    Liebe diese Story <3 hoffe sie sieht bald ein wie sehr sie ihn braucht :) warte sehnsüchtig auf ein neues Update ( auch wenn dieses erst ne halbe Std alt ist :D)
    March 11th, 2013 at 09:59pm
  • sabrini98_

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    I hope she realizes soon that she wants him as bad as he wants her! Post the new chapter please!
    March 10th, 2013 at 03:25am
  • FLSweet82

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    great new chapter
    March 9th, 2013 at 08:44pm
  • FLSweet82

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    love it cant wait for more
    March 8th, 2013 at 06:40am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    YAY!!!! :-D Bout freaking time they kissed!! They are so cute together. I'm glad that Viktor isn't giving up. Seeing him fight for her is going to be wonderful. :-D <3 Can't wait for more! Hope you are able to get at least one more up before the 1st. :-D <3 <3
    February 27th, 2013 at 04:37am
  • sabrini98_

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    Awwwwwwww! <3
    February 27th, 2013 at 02:43am
  • minasahra

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    <3 updateee?
    February 26th, 2013 at 09:46pm
  • Capt. Morgan

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    I am so totally in love with this story. :-) Just saying.
    Glad that Jane stayed part of the night! See I knew he would need help! Lol. :-) I wanna know about Jane's scars.... I have a guess about where they are from but I'm hoping I'm wrong cuz that would be a major sad face. :-( Anywho.... I love that he cooked for her! So cute! :-D Can't wait for the next update! :-D This one totally made my day after a long and busy day! :-D <3 <3
    February 21st, 2013 at 04:59am
  • sabrini98_

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    I hope theres more cute scenes and they end up together soon!
    February 19th, 2013 at 01:54am
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