Save a Bed, Sleep in My Arms! - Comments

I agree with the comment below, it does get a bit jumbled towards the end, and planning will really help you get a clear path as to where you're going with that. Aside from few grammatical errors, it seems like a great idea and a really good story. Keep up the good work :)

@ xXxMCRsavedmexXx
Yeah, I know i'll defiantly try that! thanks

I like the idea of the story but I feel you've kinda lost direction. The end of the last chapter just really really didn't fit. You could try planning out what you want to happen in the story and go from there?

@ jackyvengeance21
ahaha.. well too bad! xD

Waiting for 4 months Is an impossibility, you do not understand my obsession!!!! Please, be a little nicer!!! DX

@ jackyvengeance21
ahaha... How evil am I? ahaha you'll have to wait and find out... wait for 4 months and next update will happen!

NOOOOO you can't do this to me!!!!! He must SURVIVE!!!!!! Syn must save him somehow!!!!

@ jackyvengeance21
Yeah and a bomb. yeah he is and he wont MAKE IT OUT.. just spoiled it for you haha!

A house fire?! And Zacky's trapped?!?! Wtd update, he cant die this way!

@ SevenfoldfoREVer1666
I wish I could do that!! Jealous haha

@ fiction246
yup it is, If I think it, it happens... and thats actually very true if you ever meet me you'll understand. *says in a deep dark voice* yeah you will be.. and hell yeah

@ SevenfoldfoREVer1666
Haha it's like magic!! Looking forward to it!!! Woohoo best friends :D

@ fiction246
I knew you were going to comment..see how smart I am!! your my new best friend!! and its coming shortly!

Oh shit!!! Don't know what else to say haha can't wait to see what happens!!!

@ jackyvengeance21
I will tonight if I have the time.

@ fiction246
ahaha I believe he does.

Ayden needs to be pushed down some stairs or something!!!! Haha

YOU ARE KILLING ME. UPDATE!!!!!!!!

@ jackyvengeance21
ahaa, have you read the bew chapter really short but really good!

@ SevenfoldfoREVer1666
O.e oh my gosh, don't say that!!!! >.< I'm scared for him now. ;-;

@ jackyvengeance21
oh how do you know he will be okay? what if he's in trouble?

@ BiersackPurdy
thanks and its coming.

@ fiction246
;) and a lot of people are hating him.