Hutch or Peck? - Comments

  • GoldHeart

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    Nice chapter, but I'm sensing a verge of tension between the sisters now. Besides, you have one grammar error. Welcome back. ^__^
    February 22nd, 2018 at 08:05pm
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    Nice to see you back. Good chapter. That advice though- just wow. Looking forward to the next chapter.
    February 22nd, 2018 at 09:02am
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    The story was good, but sad at the same time. I would've left to go to a friend house, too for my sake of insanity. Update soon. ^___^
    May 27th, 2013 at 12:30am
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    Well, dang. it was a little short but intense. Update soon. ^_^
    May 27th, 2013 at 12:13am
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    Well, Mel kinda made things more complicated. Sam has acquired THINKING SPO!!! It was nice to have somber chapter. Upade Soon!! Mr. Green
    May 12th, 2013 at 06:36pm
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    Very nice, two sisters is about to get "it", well at least Mel is about too. ^_^ Update soon!!!
    May 12th, 2013 at 03:47am
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    Nice chapter. Didn't expect Joe to go beast mode over there. Anyway, great chapter and update soon.
    May 8th, 2013 at 02:34am
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    Hutch is showing side that I didn't know he had. T_T
    Update soon. XD
    May 7th, 2013 at 11:25pm
  • Shuruu

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    Lets see. Where to begin? Ok, Mel should probably stop be friends with Peck, since the beginning of the story he's done almost nothing but hurt her and make her feel awkward. Sam, on the other hand should have gave Jesse a chance, but now a stalker has been born. Hope to see where these arcs lead. Update soon. :)
    April 11th, 2013 at 11:25pm
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    Man, talking about clueless, Sam. As for Peck, doesn't he have a girlfriend? The only reason why he acting like that is because he wants to date Mel for himself.
    April 11th, 2013 at 11:00pm
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    UPDATE ALREADY!!!!
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:29am
  • Shuruu

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    So, Mel's drama seems to get started, while, Sam can finally mellow out. Although short, good chapter overall. I actually starting to feel like I'm reading 2 different, interconnecting stories. Keep it up and update soon. :)
    March 10th, 2013 at 07:35pm
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    As I read so far, Peck seem to be more of the jealous type.
    March 10th, 2013 at 06:39pm
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    Shocked could we be seeing a side-story with the Jonas brothers? I really hope to see more of Monica. Keep it up. Very Happy Can't wait for more updates.
    February 25th, 2013 at 04:25am
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    The Jonas Brothers cameo, huh? I've seen this coming though. A love triangle between Hutch, Peck, and Mel begins. Keep it up. XD
    February 24th, 2013 at 11:25pm
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    Wow. Talk about intensifying. Their mom just admitted that her alcohol was more important then them. I wonder how far this will go. Keep up the work. Can't wait til the next one. XD
    February 18th, 2013 at 08:13pm
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    Looks like the situation backfired after Sam told her mom off. Now she's just going to drink until she drops. I think its best that Sam should leave. Update soon. XD!
    February 18th, 2013 at 07:03pm
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    I think it has something to do with Mel telling Hutch about the mom drinking habit. I guess she goes by what goes in the house stays in the house. Next Chapter, please. ^_^
    February 18th, 2013 at 04:25pm
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    Interesting. I wonder if Sam's anger has anything to do with Mel telling Hutch about their mom's drinking, or if its more anger coming from something else. Nice chapter. keep'em coming, can't wait til the next one :D
    February 18th, 2013 at 06:48am
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    I got a laugh out of Sam's response to Hutch showing up. Keep it up. Can't wait til the next chapter. Smile also right now Hutch is like Cool. I really find awesome how Mel and Hutch are just sort of taking everything in stride, though partially due Hutch's confusion.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 08:09pm