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  • bxgurl95

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    Honestly I don't think you understand my level of excitement when this story is updated. First of all I reread this chapter 4 times and squealed each time (NO exaggeration) I love this damn story !!! (Said that already didn't I)
    I never want it to end EVER they are both do sweet I just am going to die. I like that their personalities are opposite, Louis taking control ;) mnsnshsknsks dsjdnsjndejjs it was even cute when he was speculating that Liam might support their relationship. Gosh and ya adorable when you get excited when your planets revealed hahA

    More Amore ;) : <3
    April 5th, 2013 at 11:56am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    Ahhhhhhh this was too adorable!!
    My face hurts from smiling so much!! Haha.
    I love how the other boys knew all along, they were just trying to confirm what they already knew. Clever.
    And they both admitted they like each other!! Ahhhhh. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! :D
    April 4th, 2013 at 10:01pm
  • teenage hearts

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    Oh my freaking god. Hell y e s. YES. Ugh, I just wanna morph the adorableness of Zouis into one human being and kiss the life out him >_> BECAUSE THIS WAS JUST SO ADORABLE AND CUTE AND UGH CAN I JUST PLEASE. I HATE YOU. And those damn bastards pulling innocent Zayn into their plan...BAHA I LOVE THIS AND YOU AND DAAAAMN
    April 4th, 2013 at 12:04pm
  • the_space_between

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    Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppp!!! Zouis kisses!!!!!! So perfect I can't even stand it. They're so adorable. I want to squish them. Great update!! Infant wait for more:)
    April 4th, 2013 at 08:29am
  • lovelyacoustic

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    xD my smile was RIDICULOUSLY LARGE!!!!!!!! like, i didn't know my face could get that big!

    MY ZAYNIE IS GETTIN' SOME!!!!! WAY TO GO BOY! if only one of us can, i'm okay it's him! hahahah!!! xD i'm so glad that they are together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

    I SHIP THEM SO HARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    so many giddy feels! thank you! eeeeep! oh yay the group is all for it and louis and zayn are gonna be the sexiest couple to ever grace this earth!!! eeeeep! <3 <3 i can't even, i'm fangirling so hard right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 rwar yayayayayayayayyayayayay! <33333333
    April 4th, 2013 at 06:37am
  • maribaylock

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    OH WHAT STAHP THE MADNESS

    ahahahahaha Louis, Liam, Harry, Niall, you little fuckers. xD And Zayynnn, kidd. xD Omygosh I'm literally dying of cuteness overdose and just general hilariousness. I love it. xD

    I'm so incredibly happy that this finally happened and that Lou knows and Zayn knows and that now they can snog whenever they want and yeah it just makes me generally very very happy. ^.^

    Perfect. Yupp, perfect. That's really all I need to say about this story. Perfect. <3
    April 4th, 2013 at 05:30am
  • GoodGirl;

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    Not a slash fan, as you know.. But that was freaking adorable!!! Swoon

    This just goes to show that all good guys are taken or gay.. *sigh*
    April 4th, 2013 at 04:32am
  • AppleCider92

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    Love it!!! :D
    April 4th, 2013 at 04:22am
  • iJigglyPuff

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    Aw that's so.. Aw(:
    April 4th, 2013 at 04:01am
  • Lawliet.

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    OH MY GOD
    THIS SO PERFECT
    JUST
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    PERFECT
    ASDFGHJKL
    YOU'RE GONNA HAVE ME START SHIPPING ZOUIS NOW BECAUSE THIS FANFICTION IS THE BEST SLASH I'VE EVER READ OK
    April 4th, 2013 at 03:54am
  • Lawliet.

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    OH MY GOD
    THIS SO PERFECT
    JUST
    SO
    PERFECT
    ASDFGHJKL
    YOU'RE GONNA HAVE ME START SHIPPING ZOUIS NOW BECAUSE THIS FANFICTION IS THE BEST SLASH I'VE EVER READ OK
    April 4th, 2013 at 03:54am
  • lovelyacoustic

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    it's impressive that you were able to write so much with a lack of dialogue! that takes up most of my stuff, i feel like, so good job on making it so detailed. i can really feel for zayn. once again, he and i will go cuddle and remorse louis. zayn for having kissed and not told, and me for not standing a chance when zayn is in the running. hahahah!! xD but seriously, that boy needs a hug. I'LL BE THERE SOON MY DARLING! <333333333

    and what if the "leadership vibe" was harry? hmmm?!?!? ooooooooor, what if it was a teacher, who just so happened to be a member of mcfly, one of the bands that writes for 1D? that would just be incredibly sexy! see examples a)
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    I mean, what?! I'm totally not trying to see another band get noticed for their utter sexiness and epic abilities!!! Who would do that?! Definitely not THIS fangirl! Mr. Green But seriously, I'd totally flip if one of those men were the teacher. xD <33333333333

    i love this story. and i love my little zayn boo! <3 all will get better, he just needs to have faith!!!
    April 3rd, 2013 at 02:32am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    Ahhhhh I just want to read more!!!
    I hate cliff hangers! Haha.
    I was happy to see Zayn had the guts to kiss Louis, but he's obviously beating himself up for it, which is sad to see as well. Louis kissed back, which meant that he liked kissing him too. I wish Zayn could see that.
    I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter!!! :)
    April 1st, 2013 at 01:49am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    So, I've been quite behind in reading this story and I'm just now catching up! Sorry about that :/ Just wanted to stop and say thank you for the shout out on my story! It means a lot :) Okay, continuing to read now! Lol
    April 1st, 2013 at 01:31am
  • Moments-of-Courage

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    Gdudkshbfkkdhsodjhckoshskfoshfkkehcnkdldjfldjhckdkjdjjfncnjfodkfksjdjldjcksfkdjsdkhdskha Okay, now that that is settled. This freaking chapter. It was absolutely wonderful, even if there wasn't any dialogue. And I totally connected with Zayn *cough, cough* like that's exactly how I felt and still feel. And they fact that it is placed in a story by my best friend makes me feel loads better. You are such an amazing person and this story is one of mu favorites. Literally, you write it so well. I am so proud of you, Kate. You're writing is just amazing and I wish everyone could read this story. I can feel Zayn's emotion and understand why it's so hard for him. Because it is a hard thing. At least he knows who he is, even if he is a little insecure about things. Well, I should probably stop...haha OH AND JAY YOU BEATIFUL THING I LOVE HIMMMMMMMM!!!!!!! HE IS PERFECT AND THE FACT THAT YOU DID THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! Oh, and the sound he heard...is it me looking too deeply into things, or was the teacher originally looking for someone else? And the calculus thing? Like for real.....it's no joke. If somebody bothered me while I tried to solve one, I would shoot death glares at then, unless it was for something important like my friends being upset. Well, this was amazing. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS STORY? YOU ARE AMAZING? DON'T STOP BEING AWESOME? AND I REALLY WISH THIS GETS UPDATED SOONER. I really do. Hahahaha HAVE AN AWESOME EASTER!!!! I LOVE YOUUUUUUUU POTAAAAAAATTTTOOOOOO ^_^
    March 31st, 2013 at 04:21pm
  • Lawliet.

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    Hahq omg I wish that my hairdresser was that cool :/
    But poor zayn. Gettin in trouble and stuff. That sucks. Haha
    Update soon!
    March 31st, 2013 at 04:09pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Oh no! Poor Zayn :( I always read this chapter update last because it's my absolute favorite!!

    He's so cerebral and quite he should just talk to Louis duh! Obviously he doesn't want to break up the boys or get anyone in trouble, but he needs to be happy too :)
    March 31st, 2013 at 03:24pm
  • teenage hearts

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    Can I...a series of paragraphs about Zayn's emotions toward Louis..WHY THE HELL CAN YOU NOT? I've had enough feels from your other fics I dot need it from this...specially bromance. Its not fair that your flawless writing is allowed to do this to pitiful me... WHY CAN'T THEY JUST MAKE OUT, SEND ME THE VID AND GET T OVER WITH. UGH.
    March 31st, 2013 at 02:44pm
  • AppleCider92

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    Love the story so far :)
    March 31st, 2013 at 08:50am
  • maribaylock

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    “Mr. Malik,” he started, which made Zayn’s eyes widen, as he had no idea how the professor could have known him, “might I ask what you’re doing, wandering around the corridors at such a late hour?”

    Ohhhhhh shit.

    This story just makes me want to curl up in a ball in a corner and cry my heart out because Zayn is so stupidly in love and he's other thinking and ugh it's just so sad. I swear, it's like you like torturing me. Just stop the maddnessssssss.

    I mean seriously. Common Zayn. Pull it together, freaking kiss Lou again, tell him you're gay and head over heels in love with him, and see what he says. Pleaseeeee.

    Ugh. I dislike you.
    <3-Mariah
    ps..... I don't actually dislike you.. I love you.. But I'm sobbing right now. *cries* poor zaynn..
    March 31st, 2013 at 07:02am