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Bloody Bandit (100)

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AWESOME CHAPTER! I loved it so much.

April 25th, 2013 at 04:41am

Bloody Bandit (100)

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Yay! <3

April 25th, 2013 at 04:32am

vashappeninsuperman_ (100)

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@ dizzydreamer2000
ask and you shall recieve

April 25th, 2013 at 03:42am

Bloody Bandit (100)

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Update please :)

April 25th, 2013 at 01:48am

Chikaylah (100)

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I really love this story so far. Its great :) youre very talented at writing ♡♥♡♥

April 6th, 2013 at 02:27pm

missdemeanorluv (100)

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Ahh I got so excited when I saw this updated! It's been awhile :) awesome chapter! Can't wait for more

April 6th, 2013 at 02:12pm

vashappeninsuperman_ (100)

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@ WhiskeyPrincess
thanks soo much

February 26th, 2013 at 01:30am

dropdeadsebring (100)

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The feels! <3 Love this.

February 25th, 2013 at 10:36pm

vashappeninsuperman_ (100)

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@ utopian-mess

@ utopian-mess
Thanks so much.your comment means so much to me.I'm definitely giving you a shout out on the next update

February 24th, 2013 at 05:52pm

utopian-mess (100)

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I've just read the whole story and gosh, this is pretty good! I can't wait to read more!

February 24th, 2013 at 03:06pm

vashappeninsuperman_ (100)

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@ on your side;
Thanks Soooo much!I knew I went to the best for some reason.Thanks for the tips!and thanks for commenting!

February 1st, 2013 at 12:05am

DELETETHISPLEASE (100)

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hey! so i saw you asked me to check this out! so i did! it's not bad, and the more you write the better you'll get at it, trust me. practice makes perfect. she calls him osito like jace does! he is a teddy bear. i guess my suggestions is to space the layout a bit, it makes the chapter longer and it's easier to see where something starts and ends. like any time there's dialog, space it so it's forming a new paragraph almost. just look at my chapters to see what i mean. (: and like i said before, the more you write the better you get. because trust me when i say i used to be the shittiest of shit shit authors. seeing where i'm at now is amazing but i still have a lot of improvements to make too haha!

January 31st, 2013 at 09:39pm