My Quest - Comments

AWESOME CHAPTER! I loved it so much.

Yay! <3

@ dizzydreamer2000
ask and you shall recieve

Update please :)

I really love this story so far. Its great :) youre very talented at writing ♡♥♡♥

Ahh I got so excited when I saw this updated! It's been awhile :) awesome chapter! Can't wait for more

@ WhiskeyPrincess
thanks soo much

The feels! <3 Love this.

@ utopian-mess

@ utopian-mess
Thanks so much.your comment means so much to me.I'm definitely giving you a shout out on the next update

I've just read the whole story and gosh, this is pretty good! I can't wait to read more!

@ on your side;
Thanks Soooo much!I knew I went to the best for some reason.Thanks for the tips!and thanks for commenting!

hey! so i saw you asked me to check this out! so i did! it's not bad, and the more you write the better you'll get at it, trust me. practice makes perfect. she calls him osito like jace does! he is a teddy bear. i guess my suggestions is to space the layout a bit, it makes the chapter longer and it's easier to see where something starts and ends. like any time there's dialog, space it so it's forming a new paragraph almost. just look at my chapters to see what i mean. (: and like i said before, the more you write the better you get. because trust me when i say i used to be the shittiest of shit shit authors. seeing where i'm at now is amazing but i still have a lot of improvements to make too haha!