Covet - Comments

Made it through the first 6 chapters and just can't stop! Great job!

Can't wait for the next update

Love this story! The relationship between Hailey and Tommy is awesome! Really really hope to read more soon!

You're a very talented writer, I'm brought into the story and love it. Keep up the great work and please update!!

Love this....Please update soon...

I loved this and I can't wait for the next update!

Even if this was simply a filler, I really enjoyed it. The smut was well written and while not ridiculous detailed I enjoyed it, good job especially for your first time writing. I was hoping he would be there in the morning, and I was surprised by the donuts.

Great chapter as usual :)

OH YAY
I loved this chapter, the smut and the fluff at the end! I would love for her to become their receptionist! I can see some great scenes happening with that..
I hope you update again soon!

I agree with everything Kelly said!!!!! Obviously good writing, both smut and otherwise :~))
I wonder about the receptionist job, though. I feel like you're setting this up so there will be some drama. Hmm. Either way, I'm really happy Tommy and Hailey are together in some way, and I'm hoping they get closer emotionally, as well! You're fab and keep updating often like this :")

Very nice. Much respect for first smut scene.
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Kudos on the losing of your smut virginity. You are now a woman, go forth and prosper! Seriously good job!

You already know my feelings on the sex scene so I'll just jump into the rest of the chapter hahahahAHSAHAHAHA I'M SO SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED AND I HATE IT.

I seriously got so pissed that he left and started ranting as I read and then he came back and I got very excited and squealed happily.

“I wish I would’ve known earlier; I just ate my body weight in cereal.”

“Wore ya out that much, did I?” he commented with a smirk. Oh that cocky son of a bitch, I love him so much. I was giggling so much at this part.

He's so sweet that he remembers Hailey doesn't like coffee! He's also really sweet because he's going to put in a good word for her to get this job. Then they'll get to see each other fairly often, which is awesome.

I loved it, as always!

You already know my feelings on the sex scene so I'll just jump into the rest of the chapter hahahahAHSAHAHAHA I'M SO SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED AND I HATE IT.

I seriously got so pissed that he left and started ranting as I read and then he came back and I got very excited and squealed happily.

“I wish I would’ve known earlier; I just ate my body weight in cereal.”

“Wore ya out that much, did I?” he commented with a smirk. Oh that cocky son of a bitch, I love him so much. I was giggling so much at this part.

He's so sweet that he remembers Hailey doesn't like coffee! He's also really sweet because he's going to put in a good word for her to get this job. Then they'll get to see each other fairly often, which is awesome.

I loved it, as always!

Lol I agree with RocknRollBlondii. Very awkward.
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well damn...can you say awkward morning after? cuz that's where I have a feeling this is gonna go...

I felt compelled to leave a comment from your sad plea :(. I really really enjoyed this chapter. I have enjoyed the whole story and like the way you are going with it. Keep up the awesomely awesome work!

the last chapter kind of confused me, because i thought that the job with helping Tommy's dad was a paying job (??), maybe it was the time skip.
I loved the gym scene and I really hope she becomes his soon and he doesnt freak out and go all cold shoulder on her after they have sex
Cant wait for the next update! *hope its soon*

OH DAMN, they just got it on. Apparently you got promoted, that's what the comment below me says, so congrats, thats so awesome, even though I have no idea what you got promoted to, but still.

Being a broke bitch is tough, so Hailey needs to get a job, will it have something to do with Mr. Tommy?

There better be a relationship and not just fuck-buddies, though I would love him all the same lol. Yeah, so update ASAP, because I need more of your amazing and spectacular writing! :)

CONGRATULATIONS ON GETTING PROMOTED BABE!!!

I totally feel Hailey on the whole no money thing. Being a broke bitch is a tough life.

ANYWAY, I was so excited when Tommy called. Baby cares!!!!!!!!!!!! I dunno, I just find it so adorable when he actually makes an effort because he just comes across as so abrasive and then he does something cute. It's so amazing when all the guys are like "are you Tommy's girl?" and I would probably be blushing violently everywhere but I loved that part! And then Tommy calls her babe and I threw up.

I would do anything to be a hot guy's drinking buddy. Mostly so he could walk me home and then I'd get laid. Just kidding, I'm a sexually frustrated virgin, what do I know? (No really, can I get a hot drinking buddy please?) It's really sweet that he remembered where she lived though, and he's such a gentleman to offer her his arm. Then, he kills me.

“I am very, very attracted to you, Hailey,” he slurred slowly.

I wish guys were usually that straightforward. It would save me a lot of trouble.

After that, I was very into the reading because it was pretty hot and tbh I wish you could write smut because wow I never realized how bad I want Tommy smut. I have read some (of course, frustrated virgin, remember?) but hey, too much is never enough right?

Loved it, as usual. It came out really well!

SO much happened in this update!!!!!! I love how Tommy called Hailey "babe" and how they're sort of drinking buddies! It reiterates how their relationship is practical and not a fairy tale, I suppose. I also really liked how he's starting to open up to her!!!!!! I'm hoping ( ) that's foreshadowing and they'll slowly get closer. I really like them together. I also like how Hailey isn't quite head-over-heels for him; she didn't really pay much attention to her attire and she wasn't having a panic attack about him calling her (I'm sure most girls would just drop dead).
My favorite part of the whole update: TOMMY IS STILL SWEET WHILE DRUNK.