Another City...Another Man? - Comments

  • kayk33

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    Hmmm I can't tell if Kaner likes her or not...
    June 11th, 2013 at 03:34pm
  • kayk33

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    I cried when the pens got knocked out. I'm from Boston and my boyfriend, being a dumb jock, just laughed at me. But I hope the hawks aniliate the bruins, just to piss the bf and my city off haha :) but I honestly do love this story! Update soon :)
    June 9th, 2013 at 11:36pm
  • HereinParadise

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    Hawks to the final! loved the new chapter!
    June 9th, 2013 at 08:24am
  • ATL_Beauty_88

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    I love you story and I am pretty bummed that Our Penguins are out too but I'm rooting for the Hawk come on one of the star players ha my last name. Just beat the Bruins or at least Chara and Lucic. Lol Laughing
    June 9th, 2013 at 05:24am
  • kayk33

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    Go hawks! Since my penguins aren't looking too great... But I'm excited for what you have planned! Update soon!
    June 7th, 2013 at 04:56am
  • marscapoon

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    I just want a happy ending...is that too much to ask for? haha. Keep writing!
    June 6th, 2013 at 07:04am
  • fangholly9792

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    @ bhawk_cyclone
    Please do not involve a relapse. Also a tad overdone.
    June 1st, 2013 at 09:34am
  • HawkeyGirl1016

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    @ fangholly9792
    Fear not, pregnancy is not the plan :) I have an even more awful idea in mind, to keep the drama going, if that makes sense at all
    June 1st, 2013 at 08:17am
  • fangholly9792

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    Please don't let have her get pregnant. It's a story line that's overused and it would kind of ruin this story. Just my thoughts
    May 31st, 2013 at 07:42am
  • kayk33

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    She's being kind of dramatic. Well, maybe she isn't. I've never been in her position so haha but anyway, your writing is still stellar<3
    May 27th, 2013 at 03:45am
  • Kenarik

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    I hope she hears later on in the season that they all liked her voice and she finds out that she will not be laughed at for her song.
    May 27th, 2013 at 02:03am
  • fangholly9792

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    More like one of those after parties where there's no one but the nhl players.
    May 21st, 2013 at 05:55am
  • shtephx3

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    Moooore<3
    May 21st, 2013 at 04:20am
  • kayk33

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    Bad things always happen at Clubs.
    May 21st, 2013 at 04:04am
  • fangholly9792

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    How about an after party scene just with the players, where Jean could sing?
    May 20th, 2013 at 10:49pm
  • pensfan58

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    May 19th, 2013 at 06:38am
  • Hawkchick85

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    I love the kiss thing.... that was great. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    May 19th, 2013 at 06:15am
  • HawkeyGirl1016

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    @ pensfan58
    No, there's no prequel, but there will eventually be a sequel
    May 18th, 2013 at 05:51pm
  • pensfan58

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    Is there like a prequel?
    May 18th, 2013 at 05:04pm
  • kayk33

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    I really, really hope nothing too traumatic happens to anyone. I like the fact that they are very supportive of her still and dreams like that are scary, waking up and believing it. It screws up your sleep pattern for a while but anyone I loved the little "You, Jonathan and Kaner." That cracked me up. Please update soon!
    May 11th, 2013 at 05:24am