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  • Star Angel

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    update soon like now please
    April 9th, 2013 at 08:39am
  • Albluerose

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    update woman
    April 8th, 2013 at 03:19pm
  • kshelton2011

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    I really like this ((: This is getting good, plus I can completely imagine all the character, especially Fallon XD ((:
    April 6th, 2013 at 05:58am
  • January Rose

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    I really like this story. It is suspenseful, mysterious and overall good.
    Please update soon! Smile
    April 6th, 2013 at 04:10am
  • DanaTheDanish

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    @ Nataley2610
    I have finally got an idea and started on a chapter! I hope I'm able to finish it sometime tonight or tomorrow. If not, hopefully this weekend. But I can guarantee that it'll be up by the end of this week, even if I have to go back and reread the whole story just to get ideas! :D
    April 3rd, 2013 at 03:06am
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    @ Nataley2610
    I know, I know. I'm terribly sorry for the wait! Please, if you will, read this: To people reading Endless Love. I have new plans for this story.
    March 22nd, 2013 at 06:05pm
  • Nataley2610

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    please update... ive waited long enough (lol) but please i actually really enjoy this story...
    March 21st, 2013 at 11:19pm
  • DanaTheDanish

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    March 7th, 2013 at 11:52pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    Wow. Bye.
    March 7th, 2013 at 06:22am
  • DanaTheDanish

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    @ discoveringclouds
    I don't want to sound rude or anything, but I honestly don't see why this conversation has to keep going. You don't like sex scenes, I'm going to write about them because I like them. You saying "Ewwwww" and wondering why it's important that I write it out is slightly offensive. I am taking what you're saying how you took me saying "sex God". Therefore, I am asking you to please stop and drop the subject, and if you must continue, stop reading my story, because it's something that I like and am going to do.

    Is it not a published book or something? I'll have to look both of those up when I get the chance, thanks.
    March 7th, 2013 at 04:58am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Ewwwwwwww.

    Don't tell me, but I seriously wonder why it's so important that you write it out.

    The Matchmaker's promise is one of the best stories I ever read! You should google it, it was on quizilla but it ended on another writing website. I think I'll go back and read it again, the author did a really nice job. Another really fantastic story is called the Beast and the Brain by Downy, it's here on Mibba, also really fantastically written. A very original and clean plot with lots of excitement and cool things. I don't want to give it away, it's too fantastic a story for that!
    March 7th, 2013 at 01:31am
  • DanaTheDanish

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    @ discoveringclouds
    It sounds like a good story.

    I didn't say that I don't like it, just that I have writer's block. I love this story, as does others. So I can't just quit. And I'm going to write one, along with things leading up to it happening. I like writing scenes like that, but I'm not going to make the whole story about it. My mind is set on it eventually happening.
    March 6th, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    If you don't like your story end it! The readers will know you don't like it, and who wants to read what you don't even like?
    March 6th, 2013 at 10:11pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    You know.. One my favourite stories was called a matchmakers promise. The story went on and eventually the girl was pregnant. What was beautiful about the story was that the love wasn't exposed to even the reader let alone the other characters. The whole story was about situations and the community and their love was just for them.
    I encourage you not to write those scenes at all. They are popular but you won't feel content. I don't think so. It's just that they are so nasty that you eventually wonder why your ever wrote it- speaking from some
    Experience although i never wrote stuff like this or about sex..
    March 6th, 2013 at 10:11pm
  • DanaTheDanish

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    @ discoveringclouds
    That is true. You weren't necessarily strange, just confusing.

    Um. Random, but about this story. I'm not sure where I'm going with this.. I ended up starting a new one, because I ended up with writer's block for this one. So.. yeah. But I'll update the chapter eventually. I can warn you about sex scenes if you want to continue reading it, since the whole plot isn't going to be about sex, and you can just skip them. Or something. I don't know if I'm going to write full on sex scenes, because.. yeah.. but just letting you know.
    March 6th, 2013 at 09:19pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    Sometimes I don't realize I've changed until I sit and reflect. Sometimes I read something and it really makes me wonder what my position on it will be. Then I think one thing until I really reflect or am faced with trouble.

    We learn from experience. Lol once I heard something interesting. If experience is your teacher be happy that your teacher is God.

    Something like that. All the trials an tribulations really show which of us is best in deeds. Like doing good deeds is really important.

    Lol I'm glad I'm less strange to you now... And that I confused you.
    March 6th, 2013 at 09:05pm
  • DanaTheDanish

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    @ discoveringclouds
    Well, see yeah, I get that. I'm not opposed to changing, not at all. I've changed a lot over the years, become more mature. Of course, that's normal with growing up. But when you said you're changing me, I was.. confused. More so because I didn't feel like I was changing, and I didn't see how you possibly could. Although, I do say, that the more I talk to you, the more open I get. I'm very guarded with people I first meet, only because of past experiences, so I suppose that's one way of changing things. I see what you mean now. Sorry if I overreacted. c:
    March 6th, 2013 at 08:36pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    Mwahahahahhaha

    Our actions make a difference whether you think I can say it or not. :)

    I'm not trying to freak you out anymore... Your reaction is quite strongly opposed to changing. I'm not changing you in a specific way, or new trying anything , I'm just saying each interaction people have impacts them and their experience and observations change them. Nothing wrong with that. It's just learning and developing.
    March 6th, 2013 at 08:19pm
  • DanaTheDanish

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    @ discoveringclouds
    Okay.

    Eh, not necessarily. I've had a friend pretend to be a girl, then tell us he was really a guy. It didn't change things. Only because I had already talked to him for a while. If you were my science teacher, I also wouldn't care, since I don't have any teachers anymore. Not to mention, they're just a person. You changing your age wouldn't change much, either, since I'm not giving you personal information about myself.

    You're not changing me. I can only change myself, and only if I want to. I really don't understand how you can say you're changing me...when you're not.
    March 6th, 2013 at 06:41pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    I've watched a few episodes for class once. Haha.
    Yeah it's like that type of idea, so it's probably the same.

    Just me talking to you changes you. And changes me. Like me telling you that I'm actually your fifty year old science teacher would change your approach to me. And me telling you that I'm actually a eighteen year old boy would change how you talk to me too. You would also be suspicious if I really changed my age on mibba and wonder if other people do.

    I'm changing you. Afterall humans are social beings.
    March 6th, 2013 at 05:27pm