Apocalyptic Love - Comments

Love it!! It would definitely a little awkward, with him cracking jokes like that. Lol. I can't wait to read more though!! Update soon!

This is such an original story and idea, the first chapter alone made that clear. I love the conversations between them, it's always so amusing! :)
The writing always keeps my attention and the character seem very well rounded! I hope that you'll keep this up and that your amazing writing will produce more chapters to come!!
Definitely recommending! :D

This fic series is just awesome! I love the originality and how you have given the characters specific traits that make them all come to life. I think if you wanted to, you could pursue publishing something like this. I can't wait to read more!

Hahahaha I actually had a good laugh at when he called her Jane, it was so cute that she didn't understand what he meant! Haha, but seriously man! This dude is already bossing her around and she hasn't even been part of the group for more than a day haha! Hahaha oh shit their banter is hilarious. Arrogant human. :')

And then you find out that the actually have an adorable history! Haha oh my this is so wonderful! (: I can't wait till you update again! I wonder who won the battle between the wolves and the bears! And who are the kings? :O the animal kings? ;)

Yikes! I can't believe she stabbed him haha. But honestly, he should now, living in a world like this, that sneaking up on people you don't know isn't the best idea. Of course someone will panic and someone will get hurt haha. I can totally feel her pain haha, to come from only being one person. Being able to be as quiet and quick as you can manage. And then having a whole group of other people around you, having their own minds. That's something you can't control and it would be frustrating when there is more noise going n than there should be! Anyway, must go on to the next now :)

Just read the second chapter!! It's so cool that she grew up in this world. It's almost like a story from the point of view from Judith Grimes haha :') plus it makes me actually LIKE this character because a) she has actual instincts that someone in this world should have, and that definitely does not make her an annoying damsel. You mention she got separated from Doc, but I hope that doesn't mean he is dead. Anyway, about to read on! So far so good!

Oh wow. Wonder who the kings are...? Love the new update. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!! =)

Intense! Please update soon. :D

Nice update!

.....wow. Can't believe she stabbed him but none the less its a reasonable response after shes been alone for so long. Still, thats just intense. I can't wait to read more, Update soon!!!

Update soon!

This is really cool! I'd love to read more.

Wow!! This is so damn powerful! Within every thought, every action, every image, I truly did feel that evoked sense. The sense that you need to neatly place into your readers heads in order for a story like this to contain a fraction of reality. Desperation, or better yet, survival. I felt the strong drive, I felt as though I myself were being pushed by the drive. The drive to live in an apocalyptic world like this one.

Jesus this is so powerful haha. I know I've said this before but hell, the concept is new and it's fresh. The characters are interesting, intriguing and definitely mixed. You could just shiver at the threat that just bounded off of the lion. He way he stalked her and taunted her like prey, a truly well done evil character. I think that was a smart way to play it, if the apocalyptic world is gonna be ruled by something people aren't familiar with. We needed to know who the threat was, how they were a threat in any case. We needed to know the extremities of how bad this could get before we could identify with the humans. Very clever.

I have to also mention that I was very reminded of Red and the Wolf, and this made me thoroughly enjoy the banter between her and the lion. Gave me little memories and it made me sad all over again that Red's Heart is finished. :(

But oh my god I need to read the next chapter so bad :L please please update soon. I will be catching up on Maleficent in the meantime! I didn't realise how far I actually was behind until I just checked so I better get reading!

This is pretty awesome. It's a new way of seeing it. :D I can't wait to read more. Keep on keeping on! Update soon!!