does the rewrite have chapters yet? im really in suspense with this story its one of the best frerards ive come accross especially cuz its got bert in it
Hey im @MosherMonster from twitter. I think you should continue but I can tell you have some trouble with this story. I would say continue it until you get to a stopping point. Also there were some consistant mistakes that I noticed. You use He's instead of his and throw instead of through. Sorry if that seemed overly critical I didn't mean it to be :/ anyway keep writing :D
@ GerardCoffeeWay Aw I love you so much you know that and I'm really lucky to have you and I know I do say a lot of shit and I fuck up but it's coz im scared of losing you i love you with all my heart and soul xxx Frankie xoxo
@ Frankie Iero-Way You are amazing and don't let anyone tell you differently you are the best think that ever happened to me and I love you with all my heart Love you Gee xoxo
@ GerardCoffeeWay Hey babe aww I'm really not an amazing. Writer I'm surprised that some people would read my crappy story and glad you like it though kinda got nervous when it came to writing about us. I'm really not amazing but you are amazing and I'm lucky to have you xx Love you too Frankie xoxo
Hey baby I just wanted to say please carry on with blood cos you are an amazing writer and I love the story's of us so much as well as the frerard You are amazing Love you Gee xoxo
@ earth2the morgue Sorry about that plus you will see soon in like the next chap or so Ill give a good description and it'll make more sense btw sorry I haven't updated I've been in New York and have ONLY just got back so yeah ill update when I'm not all over the place XD xx
whos perspective is ch 38 in? Idk it just.confuses me...its a good chapter I just don't understand it..cant picture the people because idk what they look like
@ LoveByteHeart same here reading fanfiction doesnt make me upset and ill try but i cant update everyday coz i gotta run around after two little ones but ill try my best x
You must continue even though its hard. I feel your pain, I cried so so so much when I found out they split but for some reason fanfiction dosent make me sad. I think it's because it's AU and they are still kinda together. Idk, I'm just really sad :( I'd love for you to continue, so yeah please :3
when you go back to the freardness i think you should have like every other chapter with u and yer gf and the other ones freard cuz there both adorable. i was wondering tho..is bert going to enter the story at any point in the near future i think thatd b really cool so frankie can fight for his man