Hey! I love the story!!! I just wanted to say what I think Mikey and Ray's child should look and act like! I hope you agree! Name: Mercee Dom/Fertile: Dom Hair Color/Hair Type: Long, Curly(like Ray's but not as extreme), Black/Brown Eye color(Fertile): Emerald Green Personality: Strong, Determined, Sarcastic (even at a young age), Funny
Wow I'm about to start like a total bitch, but you'd get a helluva lot more readers if your summary wasn't a huge run-on sentence. People (like me) see something like that, assume the story will be written the same way, then click away. Sorry:/