Devour my Soul - Comments

Hey. :)
At first I thought this was a little strange, but the more I read I really started to like it. I still can't get used to her soul having it's own persona, but the entire idea is really cool.
Seriously though, Evan isn't going with her? & Where does she think she's going?
I was a little bummed that she's in love with him now, though. I liked the defiance in her.

Haha. This isn't what I was expecting. Lol. I love it when a story isn't predictable. Please update soon!! I can't wait to read more!! :D

I want to cry now...I'm so glad that he saved her, but I can only imagine the fight she'll put up against him as soon as she gets better though. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!!

Honestly, this story just keeps getting better. Update soon, yeah?

Honestly, this story just keeps getting better. Update soon, yeah?

I hope that guy dies...just saying. He annoys the holy heck out of me. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!! :D

Must you always leave with a cliffhanger? Drives me totally and absolutely insane. Please update soon! I really can't wait to read more.

I like what you have done for this. You did the plot well. Sometimes people have great plots, but their story falls flat -not yours. It's really good and I look forward to the next update.

Oh my, I kinda want to cry...maybe..just a little. Please update soon!! I definitely can't wait to read more.

this is something of a beautiful plotline. i really enjoy reading the emotions and the characters. wisely chosen story

wow i don't ever think i have read a concept quite like this. Your description is amazing. I really like this even though there are some parts i don't completely understand yet, like her soul taking the form of a wolf etc. But that doesn't slow me down in the least, if anything it makes me want to keep reading.

Aww. The description in this chapter made me happy. Lol. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!! :D

Ah, I love how unique this is; I really like the idea you got from the picture you chose. (: Very creative. I adore fantasy things like this. Can't wait to see it completed!

Very beautiful story you have here, I do hope you continue it! :)

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I have to admit, this is so not what I expected. This is beautifully written and your sense of style and writing is amazing. I don't think I've ever fallen in love with a story quicker than this. You are brilliant! I'm totally recommending this.

First of all, you have a new subscriber. This story is phenomenal, and I cannot wait for the next installment. I love that this is a new take on the old cliche love triangle. It is fresh and original, leading the reader to guess on how Selena is going to react. Will she follow her heart and Antheon to Evan, or will she play it safe and marry Hayden? The world you have created within this story is just as original as the new take on the love triangle. It is a literal take on soul mates, and the power that it can give people in a metaphorical sense.

Even though the world is fantastic, the characters are not. They are well-developed, and they fit the story perfectly. It seems as though it would be possible to meet them while walking down the street! Second of all, I love how you wrote Selena's POV. Usually, I am very hesitant about reading 1st POV because execution can be so lackluster and obnoxious, but you really hit the nail on the head. You created Selena to be a character that I think a lot of people can relate to; she doesn't push the reader away, but draw them into her world and her feelings.

Okay I just read the first chapter. All I have to say is, what the hell man? How did you get to be such a good writer? The way you write has improved like crazy. I'm serious. Comparing to the very first book I ever read of yours to now, I think you have seriously improved. I'm glad you joined Mibba! Because I think it fueled your direction and let your writing become more real in a way. Because you're sort of writing for the real world, and getting real reactions from real readers who would be buying your things from the shelf. So I'm glad you did that, because damn you write like a professional. It's so crazy haha.

Your concepts are unique as always. I have to say this is one of my favourite concepts that you've written! This isn't just about finding love but it's avoiding it, and not wanting it, but wanting it at the same time! It's all kinds of twists and emotional disasters. But I love it, because it's very humanly. Love is a very complicated matter. Sometimes you end up with someone you know you shouldn't end up with, sometimes you're attracted to someone you know you shouldn't be attracted to! So I think it's awesome that you've written it to be so open and apparent in this little world. I love the kinds of worlds where everybody in the world is aware of the 'special things' going on, if you know what I mean. I'm sort of getting tired of there being secret vampires that girls fall in love with.. haha.

But anyway, I can already see that I'm going to love Evan! He's so damn charming. Damn charming boys. Haha, the way you wrote him was hella suave. That makes me feel sorry for Hayden, but ah well. Can't always win can you! Haha, so yes that's the comment for the first chapter. (:

Interesting.

It's very interesting, I don't think theres a need to worry about that. Lol. It's a good thing that Hayden can understand. Update soon please!!

@ unapalomayunaflor
Thanks so much for your awesome comments! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! ... It's definitely my special baby right now, I just have so many ideas that I hope you love!

@ IceDeath.
Thanks! I'm hoping its interesting!
I'm trying to develop a different world that we can still relate to and yet wish that we all had the soul mate thing going on in our real world.