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  • EssenceOfFiction

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    I haven’t used mibba in a while; but every so often I remember this story and how much it affected me, how much I felt just from reading it. I doubt you, the author, even come on here anymore. But I just needed to comment real quick as I am now in the middle of reading this, probably for the 20th time since I first read it 4 years ago, and I still am in awe at the storyline and how perfectly written it is. So thank you for putting it out there, I’m reading it and enjoying it just as much as I did the first time round
    February 6th, 2020 at 02:56am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Amazing story!!! But what happened to her? To Bri??? Totally not the end I was expecting. Do you think you'll finish it? Omg I need to know what happened!!
    September 23rd, 2015 at 07:47pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    I'm really liking this story but I am seriously confused, I thought he actually called and talked to Larry about getting someone to come and clean up the blood? Warner Bros sounds more like the mafia than a record company lol
    September 23rd, 2015 at 10:51am
  • Jody!

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    Wow.
    Just finished this and I am crying.
    It's amazing.
    January 27th, 2015 at 04:27am
  • Annely

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    finished reading, beautiful story mam, made me cry a lot of times
    October 18th, 2014 at 03:13am
  • Annely

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    dude wtf
    stop it
    you had me at the verge of tears about 5 times and I'm on chapter 21
    October 17th, 2014 at 10:34pm
  • Star Angel

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    Wow amazing it touched me. If ya ever want to talk send me a message
    September 19th, 2013 at 01:04am
  • Hatikva

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    I'm so sorry I couldn't comment earlier but here I am. Your story moved me - us, I think. It's realistic and complex - I've already said that but I want to point this out once again because there's not so many good fics like this nowadays - well, at least, fanfics focusing on a father/daughter relationship. A difficult relationship between human beings linked and loving each other deeply but who are lost and scarred.
    The ending is perfect and I'm glad that you wrote this as a what I call "open" ending. An ending that lets the reader wonder and think about it - letting our imagination flow. The last words, letting us know that she's fighting made me tear up a little bit because god, yes! Yes she's fighting and trying and it gives us hope. I mean, what you're implying here...wow. I'm speechless.
    And I'm very glad that this story helped you. You put everything you had in this story and thank you, thank you for sharing this with us. I'm surprised, you know, because I don't easily fall in love with fanfics (or novels, I'm a difficult reader haha) but your story is immensely inspirational. Human beings are bound to stumble and fall and sometimes it is hard to get up and keep on walking the path ahead of us. But I think we've got the strength to do so - and it often requires the help of those loving us. We just have to keep in my mind that we're loved. We are. Moreover, we learn to take the hands of those who are willing to help us instead of staring at it.
    I hope you'll be okay. I wish you a happy life - with its ups and downs. I'm sorry that my comment isn't very interesting but I really loved - why loved? LOVE - this story. Once again, I wish you the best.
    September 12th, 2013 at 01:48pm
  • IStoleRennie.

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    This is truly amazing it is so moving and inspirational, I'm so glad you pulled through and that you wrote this story, I hope it did everything you wanted it to.
    September 10th, 2013 at 02:00am
  • Elizabeth Lavenza

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    This story deserves all my tears and heartfelt emotions. Brilliant. Congratulations on your recovery, I know we all have our stories, our own problems and our own ways of dealing with them. I'm proud of you for carrying on. Thank you for sharing your story with us. You are brilliant, never forget that. x
    September 8th, 2013 at 11:10am
  • strawberrybubble

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    Beautiful ending to an amazing story. Thank you for sharing it with us =)
    September 6th, 2013 at 08:40am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I don't even know what to say. The story was amazing and beautiful and I'm so glad you shared it with us...and that you are here to share it with us. =) Thank you. <3
    September 6th, 2013 at 08:11am
  • synystergirl

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    I'm so glad for the updated chapters. I started reading this story a while ago but had to read it again from the beginning. It's realy a very beautiful and painful story. I am so proud of you for writing this and for letting us into your life. This had to be very hard for you to write but you did a wonderful job. I'm so glad you're here with us and I wish you so much happiness in your life. If you ever need someone to talk to please don't hesitate to reach out. I am an admin on an A7X fan page and am known to most of the other admins as the deathbat momma. There is always room for more in my heart. Once again so very proud of you and thank you for sharing your story with us. <3
    September 6th, 2013 at 07:12am
  • heyjude;;;

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    First and for most, congratulations on your recovery. It takes a lot to make it through something like that. I know we don't know each other personally, but I'm extremely proud of you. You're such an amazing writer and I hope you continue to write. Even if it doesn't get posted on here.
    I love the way you ended it. In the big picture I feel like we don't need to know what happens after. You kind of already told us that they're leaving Huntington, and he's going to put Liza before the band now. But most importantly, she's alive. That's what we really wanted to know, and I feel like that's what the story is really about.
    And can I just say how perfectly written this story is? I mean, there's no plot holes and everything connects. Everything makes sense. It's really a masterpiece and a work of art. This will always be my favorite story of all time.
    September 6th, 2013 at 12:04am
  • lovehim...more

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    Amazing and just wow...you made it to the other side :)
    September 5th, 2013 at 10:42pm
  • akmo4725

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    You are a very talented writer and I hop to see you write more stories!! I'm so in love with this story and the feelings you go through. At some point in life I think everyone feels like there is no way out. I feel like that a lot sometimes. It's so great to see she is fighting and it's great how you wrote the epilogue base on your life!! Congrats and I hope to see more from you!!
    September 5th, 2013 at 05:38pm
  • LadyRaven

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    I'm trying really hard to not cry right now. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Okay so now I am crying. I'm glad and at the same time lost with the ending of this story. I guess I was hoping to find Liza awake and ready to live life now with a newfound purpose, but at the same time life doesn't always work that way so yeah I get why you ended it the way you did. She is fighting and will have to keep fighting even after she wakes up (and for the rest of her life), but the important thing to take away from that last sentence is that she is fighting. I also just wanted to thank you for sharing your personal story in the epilogue. I am so very glad that you were able to find a way to heal yourself through this story. It breaks my heart to know that some of this story is actually based off of your life and I hope to high heaven that you will continue to fight. I have one question for you. Will you be writing any more stories after this one? I just love your work and would be very sad if you stopped writing. You have a gift, you have inspired me to keep fighting despite how let down and depressed life makes me (and I'm sure that it has been this way for some of your other readers). It would be a crying shame to stop now when you have found an outlet to not only help yourself but others as well. Please don't stop now. I want to thank you again from the bottom of my heart for finishing this story; it is truly a beautiful piece of art.
    September 5th, 2013 at 05:18pm
  • SleepPatterns

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    The ending was beautiful. Thank you for writing such an incredible story. You have so much talent! Again, amazing job. I look forward to reading any other stories you write <3
    September 5th, 2013 at 04:25pm
  • HerSynsPiledToTheSky

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    big hugs, thank you for this story <3
    September 5th, 2013 at 03:59pm
  • heretic.

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    Beautiful ending to such a brilliant and powerful story. I'm glad you chose the ending you did, I would have been incredibly sad if it had gone the other way. And I'm so glad this story helped in your own healing process, thank YOU for sharing it with us. Arms
    September 5th, 2013 at 02:06pm