oh damn.. goosebumps and teary-eyes.. wow.. I never saw that ending coming.. I'm happy that writing that story was like a form of therapy and that it helped you heal in some ways.. there's always a way of life, if you're willing to fight- I think that is something that really stuck after reading this <3
Oh wow. This was really heartfelt, I'm happy to know that it helped to write this with what ever you've been going through. And yes, there is always a way out and I think you're really amazing for not only writing an emotional story but the fact that you're really expressing yourself and just I don't know, you're amazing :)
Hello. So I literally spent all day reading this story and now I find myself sitting here at nine o'clock at night, bawling over this story. From the first chapter I just took a complete attachment to Liza and it's just grown stronger and stronger every chapter. I hope that it doesn't end sour because I'll just curl up in a ball and crying until my body cannot produce any more tears. It's just so beautiful the way you wrote this entire story and you have the greatest strength I've ever heard of. I can't wait to read the rest of this.
let her die .. I want to see and know how the way she die and how brian continue his life after losing her let we can learn from your story .. make that more emotional ! because it could be the reason why they create song 'Dear God' .
Just finished reading your story and I have to say you are a wonderful writer. This story had me hooked and on the edge of my seat. The emotions were written and described wonderfully. This is a great story; by far one of the best I have read on Mibba. I do hope you don't stop writing outside of Mibba because you have a talent for writing. I can't wait to see how it ends. :)
It makes me incredibly sad that this is your last story. But I'm feeling like a weight is being lifted with this update. She's going to fight, you're going to fight, and that makes it easier.
I truely hope you don't stop writing though. You're so amazing at it. I also hope that you don't dissapear from the world. We've talked before and I honestly thought you were/are a really cool person.
So yeah, I look foward to the update, but at the same time I don't want this to end.
Oh my god now I can't stop crying! Please let her live! She has to, I can't imagine what would happen if she didn't. Parents are not supposed to bury their children.
Thanks for making me cry. Again. But I'm SO glad that Brian got her out of the water and that she finally listened to him, that she's fighting. I just hope it's not too little, too late. :-/
I've just spent around 3-4 hours reading this entire thing and right now I'm in tears. Your writing is perfect and the way you get the right emotion into actual words is ugh so good! Literally, best fanfic I have read for ages and I seriously cant WAIT for the next update!:) xo
Oh my God. This chapter nearly killed me. The way he explains how he cries all the time made me lose it. This story is so precious and it's real. The emotion you put in to this story is amazing.