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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    This insight into Brian--and a bit into Michelle--was great. They both are to blame; it took two of them to create Liza, and it took the two of them to build the environment that caused her to be the way she is. However, I agree with Brian that THIS particular incident is going to set them back (even Matt and Zacky know), and that is Michelle's fault. I just really hope that Liza finds the strength to keep fighting. As much as I hate her being in pain, I can't stand the thought of her ending it in the way she's been considering. Not only for her, but because of what it would do to Brian.
    May 8th, 2013 at 07:06am
  • EvilTwin12

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    this was a greatest story ever !!!! I wait you to make it continue ... ;)
    May 7th, 2013 at 12:51pm
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    This chapter was intense and it showed how heartbroken Brian would be if he were to lose Liza. He truly does love her and if she saw that, something in her head might click. I am wondering if Liza really will go through with taking her life. I can not wait to read the next update and I am looking forward to read what direction you take this story is especially the ending.
    May 7th, 2013 at 12:21am
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    jesus christ the anxiety in this chapter oh my fucking god I'm glad she's okay. update soon! (:
    May 6th, 2013 at 11:17pm
  • shasha24

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    It was such a panic filled chapter and everything was so serious until Brian starts falling and screaming though nothing happened.
    May 6th, 2013 at 12:16pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Amazing! I'm glad she was okay, that she managed not to listen to the voices for one more day and only took one sleeping pill. It hurt my heart reading Brian so scared and worried...I honestly can't wait for the next update.
    May 6th, 2013 at 09:33am
  • YourVengeance

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    LOVED THIS UPDATE!!!! I JUST HOPE TO STAY WITH YOUR ORIGINAL ENDING YOU HAD IN MIND FOR THE ENDING OF THE STORY!!!!!
    May 6th, 2013 at 09:26am
  • LadyRaven

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    This story kills me every time I read a new chapter. Please update soon. I'm really hoping that she will get the help she needs and be okay.
    May 6th, 2013 at 08:19am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Fuck your writing really knows how to make a girl cry...
    May 6th, 2013 at 06:52am
  • Planets.Collide!

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    Please please please update!! I'm loving this so much!!
    May 4th, 2013 at 01:52am
  • caligirl1605

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    This is so amazing!!! I can't get enough of it!!! Please update soon!!!
    April 26th, 2013 at 05:34am
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    well Leo was a total fucking creep. please please update soon.
    April 26th, 2013 at 01:17am
  • Star Angel

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    freaking update please love this
    April 25th, 2013 at 07:13am
  • LadyRaven

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    Finally! I have been waiting for an update on this story. I love it, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon!
    April 24th, 2013 at 05:42pm
  • heyjude;;;

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    I can't even put in to words how flawless your writing is. You subtly make references back to Brian through Liza. The way she acts towards Leo is something Brian would do, in the exact same way. It's amazing to see how you've really created an original character. She has a personality that's real, not like some other fanfics out there. I feel like she's a real person.
    Your writing is amazing. You foreshadow things without so much detail to give us a few thoughts as to what might happen, but really anything could happen. It keeps us on the edge of our seats (or screens. haha). I can't wait for your next update.
    April 24th, 2013 at 09:22am
  • Spoileddxbrat

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    Ahhhh I knew Michelle wouldn't had look for her or cared. I can't wait to you update is really an a mazing story
    April 24th, 2013 at 08:39am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Ugh, Michelle is so selfish! I really can't stand her. And I wish that Liza had punched Leo. Lol. Awe, talk about best friends! Those guys are amazing. :-) I really hope they make it and find Liza before anything bad happens to her, by her own hand or someone else's.
    April 24th, 2013 at 07:57am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Ugh, Michelle is so selfish! I really can't stand her. And I wish that Liza had punched Leo. Lol. Awe, talk about best friends! Those guys are amazing. :-) I really hope they make it and find Liza before anything bad happens to her, by her own hand or someone else's.
    April 24th, 2013 at 07:55am
  • YourVengeance

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    finally an update!!! ive missed this story so much!!!!!!!! cant wait to see what happens when everyone is on NY!!!!!
    April 24th, 2013 at 07:48am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I love those guys! I thought that was so sweet! They are going to comfort her. * cue the warm and fuzzies* and seriously Michelle!? You hag, I hope your nasty Italian gives you all kinds of STD's. Witch. She isn't a mother. She's just a selfish bitch.
    April 24th, 2013 at 05:42am