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  • Spoileddxbrat

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    Omg in was crying during this story. Is that weird? This story is so amazing I absolutey love it. I really want a happy ending I don't want cry anymore lol update soon please
    April 21st, 2013 at 10:17am
  • caligirl1605

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    Love this once I started reading I couldn't stop!!! I hope for Liza's sake her mother quits being so self centered and focuses on her daughter . Feel so bad for Brian and the stress and fears he's dealing with . Can't wait for more!
    April 6th, 2013 at 09:20am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I really hate Michelle right now, but I'm holding out hope that Val is right and she'll come around. I just can't stand for something else to upset Liza. :(
    April 4th, 2013 at 08:49am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I want to hit Michelle in the face. Cold hearted bitch! WOW.
    April 4th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • Vegas!

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    I love this story! Can't wait for the next update! :)
    April 4th, 2013 at 02:02am
  • Vegas!

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    I love this story! Can't wait for the next update! :)
    April 4th, 2013 at 02:02am
  • Star Angel

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    love this please let liza be a ok
    April 3rd, 2013 at 07:34am
  • IComeAlive

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    I am super upset with Michelle and it hurts not having a mom that even remotely cares.
    I want Liza to be okay.
    Update soon?
    April 2nd, 2013 at 08:13pm
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Eh, usual feelings. I hate Michelle. I feel bad for Liza and Val is a true sweetheart. Also Brian is a really great father. Can't wait to read more soon! (:
    April 2nd, 2013 at 07:21pm
  • Norman Reedus

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    About the ending, I would love the one that sticks to the story. Maybe it's because I prefer sad endings over happy ones even if I don't know that it's going to be sad hehe. Also Michelle, god she annoys me! She forgot to pick Liza up and Val being the amazing one she is, tries to take her mind off of things. Michael has a thing for her...or not. Hehe. I like him! Also Michelle blames Brian for a lot when she's too concered with her own daughter...She's just looking for someone else to place the attention on and blame... I'm so torn haha. Update soon =)
    April 2nd, 2013 at 09:10am
  • Norman Reedus

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    About the ending, I would love the one that sticks to the story. Maybe it's because I prefer sad endings over happy ones even if I don't know that it's going to be sad hehe. Also Michelle, god she annoys me! She forgot to pick Liza up and Val being the amazing one she is, tries to take her mind off of things. Michael has a thing for her...or not. Hehe. I like him! Also Michelle blames Brian for a lot when she's too concered with her own daughter...She's just looking for someone else to place the attention on and blame... I'm so torn haha. Update soon =)
    April 2nd, 2013 at 09:10am
  • IComeAlive

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    I adore this story and I am eagerly looking for an update!
    I would be lying if I say I didn twang a happy ending, but j don't want it to be a fake ending either, know what I mean?
    Update soon!
    March 30th, 2013 at 11:25pm
  • Hatikva

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    I'm so sorry I didn't comment earlier. I had a week of mock exams and everything was a little bit crazy on my part but now it's over so hum yeah, I'm really, really sorry.
    I wanted to say that, the more I read you, the more I'm in awe because you put so many emotions, deep ones, and it's not easy to handle it. I'm half worried, half happy because Brian has been now confronted to her daughter's problems and he tries to do everything he can AND YAY for him because he didn't only throw her daughter at a therapist to get rid of it, but he went to for HIM which is a huge step. I mean, the guy is accepting the fact, in a way, that he has problems too. And poor Liza...I'm so fuckin' worried for her. Though Brian does his best and we can see some improvement in his behaviour towards her (and oh god, I smile every damn time he calls her sweetie or tells her that he loves her or gets worried for her I mean owe that's cute Brian that's adorable even!) we're not so sure. Will the voice win the war? Will she eventually get better? There are loads of questions thus, I'm very interested to read the different endings and the one you thought suited your story best. It's your story and I trust you. So far, you didn't disappoint me ! The more realistic it is, the more it is going to be true to your idea. Some will love it, some won't (though I'm not sure people will dislike the former ending you were thinking of writing). If it's as well-written as your previous chapters, it'll make us happy to have read such an amazing story even though there's a sad ending. Or maybe it's going to be realistic in the way it's neither going to be sad nor happy? I don't know if that's English sorry haha.
    I was so angry at Michelle. Poor Liza, seriously, she didn't need that. I'm kinda sure her mother will hurt her a little bit and I don't wanna see that. That's her freaking daughter, she should be at the airport and meet them there and hug her and tell her she loves her and make up for what she did (because she's responsible for what happened to Liza, she can't deny that). I was frustrated and ugh like no Michelle, wrong fuckin' move. But you managed to make me smile : Brian is just so protective and I'm so sorry, I find this father/daughter relationship adorable and beautiful. It's hard and not perfect and that's why it's so interesting. They're fighting together.

    I really can't wait for the next update. Take care of yourself too :)
    March 29th, 2013 at 05:35pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    God, Michelle sucks. I'm sorry, but she does. I know Brian is kind of hard--or has been in the past--but at least he's there, and he really does love Liza more than life itself.

    I'm interested to see the different ways you picture this ending, though I definitely want to read YOUR ending first. And I know exactly what it's like to have a story going where you're trying to keep the readers happy, yet you feel that perhaps the story line should deviate from what they want in order to remain more realistic or true to the idea. I'm going through that right now.

    Can't wait for the next update! I adore this story.
    March 29th, 2013 at 09:47am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    It's complete bullshit that she never met them at the airport. Definite fail on michelles part. So lame. Atleast Brians their for her. Worry filled and all:p can't wait for more! And honestly I want the story to end how you envisioned it too. This story stands alone for me and i wouldnt want you to change anything to please readers, that would take from this I think. Just my thoughts.:)
    March 28th, 2013 at 08:47am
  • Star Angel

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    sounds good ill read all the endings and pick the one i like best lol
    March 28th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • Readingensues

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    This is an amazing story full of emotion. I don't cry easy but this was making me get teary-eyed. You did a great job.
    March 28th, 2013 at 05:33am
  • Skarsgard

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    i feel so bad for her. i would be crushed if my mother didnt show up after 7 years.

    i'm not sure how i feeel about the different endings. i suppose i want the truest one, but at the same time...

    this might just be the most amazing story you have written for this site. thank you.
    March 28th, 2013 at 12:32am
  • YourVengeance

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    i want there to be a happy ending but part of me doesn't...idk, I'm just confused ...great job with the updates tho~!!!!! :)
    March 28th, 2013 at 12:06am
  • Star Angel

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    please let this story have a happy ending
    March 26th, 2013 at 08:27am