Trouble Makers - Comments

Loved the update
I was wondering if she was ever gonna have a breakdown. I can't believe she has to wait two months to call home.

Why is Matt such a sweetie?!!
I love him.
I wonder how Zacky is doing though.

Oh my gosh! I can't even with this story! I need more and soon please! This is so fantastic! :DDDD

Update soon love this

So, of course, Derek deserved it. And I can totally see Matt doing something like that. I LOVE that softer side of him, how protective he was of his little sister. He's such a sweetie.

Epic chapter! I almost cried because of this. Matt is so fuckin sweet and awesome. I didn't suspect that at all.

i really loved this chapter. you really showed the softer side of matt who is really paternal by the way. i love how he was willing to kill a man for what that disgusting fucking motherfucker of a peice of shithole dick sucking ass face did to Fiona. (sorry for the cursing..that shit really gets my blood boiling) amazing work babe!

"You never forget the face of the person who was your last hope." --The Hunger Games. Haha I had to do that but that was really, really sad but well written. I have a baby sister who means the world to me and if someone ever laid a finger on her, I'd be apeshit. I thought you portrayed Mattie's emotions really well. Please update soon!

Oh my god.
I had to stop reading for a while when he was talking about raping Fifi.
I have a little nine year old sister and I took it to heart and ended up crying.
It broke my heart and then it was instantly killed when he said that she probably forgot about him and maybe won't remember him.
You can never forget someone who loved you and saved you and did whatever just to keep you safe.

danny is really fucking great to support matt in getting his sis love it Mwah :)))

Poor Matt and his sister :( I don't think she'll forget about him. Matt had it rough.

SO glad that Danny got to bust up Marissa's face. That made me so happy! I felt like doing a dance. Lol.
Poor Tanner...that was really sad. Bless his heart. I know he has other people who care, but Ash is right. Danny was his guardian, his main protector, and without her around, it's just not the same. And those stupid bitches will never leave him alone. Because that's what bullies do. I should know. :/

awww sweetie. that ending was so sad. i really wanted to drop kick those mean girls for showing up like that. And i loved that Marissa got the shit beaten out of her. lol

Update soon please

Danny beat her ass and poor tanner

You had 69 comments ;) but I just had to comment. Danny kicked that bitch's ass lol. I loved this chapter. pwease try to update soon

This update was UTTERLY fantastic! I hope Tanner gets to visit his sister, or even Ash, her best friend! That would be amazing! Then the guys will be all "WTF?" and she'll be yeah, blah blah... and they'd be like cool, can we meet them? and maybe Ash can have one of the guys and Tanner will have, not one but, FIVEEEEEEEE bodyguards! BOOOYAAAAAA! MORE SOOOOOONNNNN, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE! :DDDDDDDDD

Lauren and Shannon deserve to get the shit beat out of them. Emotionally hurting a kid like that is not cool.

HURRY THE HELL UP AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
Sprinkles out.

Hot time with Dan Dan and Mattie!
I wanted them wanted to get it on!
But then Marissa had to ruin everything!!
I kinda like Ash's POV.
I wonder what's gonna happen with those two dick heads.