The Thin Line Between Pleasure and Pain - Comments

Love this so fucking much please update soon can't wait for more xxxx

Oh holy f**k. Hun, this was so good! I absoutley loved this, and this was sooooo good!

That was so good and I am honoured to be a part of it! I thought that was so hot and really sexy. I can't wait to see what happens next now Arianna knows haha. It was so intense and to have the two of them on my character was too hot to comprehend. I really can't thank you enough! Please update this soon!

I love the way you describe Vengeance in your stories, you make him sound so nasty and devious, I personally find it sexy as hell but maybe that's my sick, twisted mind haha. Loved this chapter! I wonder what's going to happen between the two girls now that Arianna knows she's shadows slave. Looking forward to see read the next chapter!!

@ purple89
yeah well.. considering how possessive and dominant both gates and shads seem to be in this one- imagine those two together with ONE girl.. holy-smokes!! can't blame a girl for having her mind in the gutter 24/7 when it comes to those two men

time stands still.. ah yeah- hahahah forgot that I actually like him in that one too
ah, it's the same for me and my vampire story..

@ amodernmyth88
you have such a dirty mind woman!! lol!! threesome!! hahahah!! that would be interesting!!
and i seem to make Vengeance the one everyone hates in most of my stories except for Time stands Still and Wicked Ways...he's adorable in those...gposh...i really need to start working on that angels story again....it hasnn't been as popular as my other stories though so i kinda gave up on it.

“I made a deal with the devil.” -to be M Shadows sex-slave.. ya know that should probably make a normal woman frown and probably gasp BUT I guess i'm not considered normal cos all I did was thinking: "Oh hell yeah" lmao!!

aawh Ya know, you got a thing for making me dislike Vengeance in your stories?? except for the one with angels and stuff- in that one I actually like him

well.. who can blame her for reacting just by one of Gates' touches?? I mean come on! he's like the hottest damn man in the universe alongside matt.. hubba hubba!!

them three kinda need to play ''together'' soon- I would totally not enjoy reading that *cough cough*

Oh boy oh boy, this was great. Things are back to normal. Well normal for them. And now we've got a new girl!!

I didn't really need my ovaries anyway.. Haha. Holy crap! I love this! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Oh my gosh that was great! Of course Matt had to come and get her in trouble but maybe it was a test for her. Then here comes Zacky and gosh, I hope he doesn't try anything. I literally cannot wait for the next chapter.

woah holy-moly! shadows- even though he did that on purpose to get her in trouble- is so frickin' hot!!
damn- that was some spanking! and to be like that infront of zacky.. lmao

yaaay it's gonna be a long one <3

love it!

update soon please!

@ harajukubunny
You dummy!! i'll probably be in your house sitting on the chair that eats people when i right the next installment....by the way...the blue nail polish you did my toes in is epic!! i now lookin at it properly. GAAAAHHHHH!!!!!

MORE I WANT MORE!!! i loved this last installment....i'm on the edge of my seat here!

I really enjoyed reading this. I like the darker side of Syn coming out of him. It's hot. Lol. I really like how you spaced it all out, too. First you have her with Shadows, then you have her with Gates and finally you drop Jimmy in there! I was like, "Whoa!" Lol. I liked how that surprised me and I really glad that it's going to be a full length story. Thank you for entering the contest. :)

hehehe i have no idea how i missed when the first part of this was posted BUT better late than never right??

as for that 3rd part.. DAMN!! Gates can punish me like THAT anytime he wants... i wouldn't mind one tiny bit.. wooop woop!! heheheheheeh

IT'S GOIN TO BE A FULL LENGTH WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEE!!!!

btw.. jimbo needs something that will hurt.. ya don't sell your friend!! doh!! hihihi

Im so Damn happy this is gonna be full length! This is awesome and Im glad i came across it.

Oh yes. Full-length story sounds awesome :) Can't wait for the next update.

Wowza.. That was Raw... I dont know what else to say about that! Jimmy and gates... That's what dreams are made of...
I'm so glad you are turning this into a full length! I can't wait for more.