The Thin Line Between Pleasure and Pain - Comments

Interesting three shot :)

Interesting three shot :)

@ xMandiblesx
mission accomplished....job well done...god alone knows i needed that

@ purple89
Bahaha it's okay lol I typed it to make you laugh. =P

@ xMandiblesx
i would be a liar if i said that i didn't laugh out loud. and not the LOL with a straight face when i type 'LOL'. i mean i literally laughed out loud....i'm a dork...go change your undies woman!

Oh God....that was so hot! Wetness in muhhh panties lady! lmao. Mmmmm Jimmy.

Loved the update and I can't wait for the full length story. Jimmy is a bastard for betraying me lol. Mmm Brian is so hot when he is dominating. You are an amazing writer girl and you should never stop writing. I have to agree with Mandi I don't think my entry will be ass good as yours and I kinda want to drop out as well because you should win because you are just amazing. I love you babe and I am looking forward to the full story. Are you still going to use my name? If so my name is spelled Arianna just so you know.

@ xMandiblesx
awww....thank you so much sweetie....i really appreciate your feedback. it makes me all warm and tingly inside to see someone say such lovely things.....and i'm sure your entry will be great...just remember what i told you...take a breather and don't pressure yourself...

Ugh...I'm going to be honest. Your writing abilities are amazing. So detailed and perfectly stunning. It makes me feel this weird churning in my stomach because I wish my writing was that good. I loved the first two chapters so far and you captured the whole dominate me thing flawlessly. lol I kinda wanna drop out of the contest now because I think your story deserves to win.

I like this and I like the two faced jimmy too I can't wait for more

I like this and I like the two faced jimmy too I can't wait for more

oh gosh this is awesome!! i wonder why shadows decided to get rid of her?? and why jimmy thought that he could sell his friend without her knowing..
will syn continue being a weird sick bastard??
AND i wished that she would've kicked jimmys nuts instead of a punch in the jaw

and well.. i love this idea so i hope you'll turn it into a full-length story <3

Oh Lord Jimmy what are you doing...go her for punching him in the face, he was the one that got her in this mess anyway. No don't tell Syn, if you tell Syn, I'll come down there and punch you both in the balls OK? Write more- I wanna know what happens next!

Oh fuck yeah!! Please please make this into a full length. It's so dark and sexy. I love how evil Syn is in this. Jesus, this was so hot. I can't wait for the next installment. And really James, your just gunna be sneaky like that? She's gunna get punished for popping him one and I'm guessing it's not gunna be as simple as Syn shoving his monstrosity down her throat.. Even though that was insanely hot. Your killing me here!!

Omg please make this into a full length! I will love you forever! LOL. I am loving this so far and I cant wait for the next part! Love it! Love it! Love it!

Omg please make this into a full length! I will love you forever! LOL. I am loving this so far and I cant wait for the next part! Love it! Love it! Love it!

I love it! I feel so special that this story is for me. I wish you good luck in this competition. You are a great writer! Mmm Matt and Brian are so fucking hot. I cant wait for smutty time so hurry up and uodate girl!

@ Rath
thanks! when i came across your competition i decided that a one shot really wouldn't cover where i'm going with this....but i need to ask you something so i'm gonna om you with it now....

It's very good so far. I'll make a better comment about the whole thing once, it's completed, but I'm liking it so far. :)

@ purple89
I do feel very special! Yeah I see where you're coming from...Zacky's too much of an adorable cutie pie to be super evil like Matt can be...YAY FOR SMUT!