Iris - Comments

I love this story. When I first opened it I wasn't sure if like it but soon enough next time I looked up the sun was coming up.. So much for sleep :D

I love it

Good chapter!!!

People are so horrible...starting rumours and things!!! Looking forward to the next one :)

:( poor thing!!! She misses being with Jimmy!!! Looking forward to more :)

I would be here even if I was dead!! Lol this was an adorable update. Keep it up darlin'!!!

Awe darling. You shouldn't hate yourself. Please don't. I hate myself everyday and it gets me nowhere.
I think you're a brilliant writer and I absolutely love this story!!! It makes me smile and I just... Ug I love it!!!!!!!

Really great chapter :) it's nice that they welcome her and care about her so much!!!

Aww lovely family time :) the grandad was hilarious!!! Looking forward to more!!

Loved the cuteness!!!! And jimmy won her a penguin :) loved it!!!

Oh my gosh she got drunk!!! But the I love you's at the end were really sweet :) looking forward to more!!!

DC merchandise with Marvel,

Looks like me and Iris need to have a little chat she's just done the unthinkable here, Marvel of course is the far better comics.

If you cant tell from that I'm a couple chapters behind but as you know thats kind of my style so going on that have I told you recentally how much I love your writing, you really make this story flow and seem natural and I'm usally always smiling or angry so far no sadness but with 15 its been lots of smiles and jokes and I like that you're able to do this so easy.

Such a long wait and this is the crap I give you.

That chapter wasn't crap, I rather liked it and though I agree with the talk in the kitchen being a little weird I think that made it more real cause it was odd and akward what teen doesn't feel that way when discusing something as personal as they was?

I love being in Jimmys head really its amazing how well you think as him I don't know how you do it I swear I don't, I love how he's thinking not the sexual deviant part of course but the whole if he was her he wouldn't leave his already established and loved family its just deep and seren I guess.

I still cant see Iris as a 13 yr old, but I so understand the way her behaviour as drunk is and I think you have it down pat, I don't like how Jimmy isn't the least bit upset over it thouh if she was in LA with her adoptive family I'm sure they'd have tore her a new one but I think he handled the situation some what okay though if I where him I'd have been upset.

I think both chapters where good and neither one was crap you hear me? You have to stop putting yourself down or else I'll send my imaginary team of happy people to see you! Okay I'm going to shut up now I cant wait for the next up date

Much <3 Kat

Great chapter :) it's understandable that she hasn't rushed into calling Jimmy 'dad'. Hope she does eventually though!!! Looking forward to more :)

I'm finally caught up!!! I absolutely adore this story. It's so damn cute and sweet!!!

I don't know if its you or the writing I love, but damn this chapter made me smile the whole time this one was just so damn cute.

Also I really like that Trevor exsplained what was going on why him and his father behave the way they do, I still don't like the mother but this makes things seem a bit better but I mean after thirteen years Iris would be used to the way they treat her so really if they wanted her happy they should have let Jimmy in a long while ago

i highly enjoy reading this story love how she's warming up and opens up to jimmy and bri at least for now and the way those two just messes with each other is so cute

Great update :) that was really interesting about Trevor and the dad. Looking forward to more :)

Awww I love that they were having fun. And I loved the conversation she had with her dad, though I think jimmy may have heard the end. Looking forward to more!!!

I love you I love you I love you

I'm so happy for this chapter and it was so cute and they all seem to like her and I like that I want to know though whats up with Val n Matt also is it your destiny to make me hate her parents like I know her dad didn't mean the whole you'll get used to it thing in the way I tool it but its just like both of them want her out of the house and that just pisses me off.

Much <3 Kat

Chapter 11

Okay you should know by now I'm very upset with no answer to what Jimmy and Trev talked about this makes me super sad, I'm hoping you reveal it soon.

I also have to say I really like how Jimmy is kind of just giving Iris the space she needs to get used to being at his place and the guys are not crowding in on them, I also have come to notice that Iris seems to be more like fifteen or sixteen then thirteen she's very mature for her age in this, I havent decided if that is going to be a good or bad thing yet.

I love Trevor seriously I just love him, though I must keep reading now to see what else was said other then threatining of the penis...
Gate
pretend I had heard nothing.

Me thinks maybe you meant hadn't here?

Iris reminds me of me when it comes to my love of video games serious she's awesome depending on how which sytem she likes the best that always will be a factor of course lol.

Okay first of this chapter wasn't a filler, second of all you should be proud of your writing or wait until you are proud to give us a chapter, I enjoyed this chapter and am curious as to why Jimmy is so suddenly and quickly adding her to his insurance..

chapter 12

I like that Jimmy has a good relationship with his family and that you include them, I also like the mental battle he was having about how he treated his friends and then bam Gates scares the shit out of him, it was quit funny.

So this might seem really terrible but I so picture Jimmy leaving one of the guys out side all night I don't think he would Iris ya know at least not with out a tent but I could see him doing it to Shory shit or Zacky..

Iris and Gates banter is funny I think they should have a bromance even though Iris isn't a bro just the way they interact so far make me think of Dr.Banner and Toney Stark, yes I know I'm a dork, but seriously they have that kind of chemistry going on and it make me laugh, (I hope you have seen the Avengers to understand that statement)

So I already dislike Gena for forcing her to wear and buy the suit like that and if she is thirteen her tankini so should have covered everything, I just don't like her.

I hope chapter 13 has a pool party and some Zacky intreaction *Update soon maybe?*