Iris - Comments

Chapter 10

Alright so fare I like where this one is going I'm just to the point of her going in the house and I love how she was complaining about maybe having to play the violen but treating it with such care it just shows a side fo her I really like.

I already love the fact she reconized them from COD, that is great I cant wait till the guys place two and two togather about Trevor :D I also like how Zacky was picking on Jimmy and Matt had to cover it up but how could she be shy of his dimpled smile?

I love the way her and Short Shit seem to be bonding so quickly specially over the guys being ass-hats to him, this story makes me smile, you best keep it that way you understand?

I get why Iris is so shy and stuff but as their in the car I'm wondering though why she seemed so distand after the little making fun of joking the did in the car.

I love how she was so worried about telling Jimmy of her problem but he seemed to be so cool about it, and the guys so far seem to just really be nice and awesome to her.

I love the direction in which this story is going and with the way you have everyone behaving, seriously I think you might be my fave author for Avenged, I read a lot of stories where people make them jack-tards or ya know overly nice or overly affectionat and you just make them seem real and relatable.

I love how Iris is warming up and cracking jokes at short Shit, that Deaf joke was gold I laughed out loud with that one :D I just loved the way you ended this chapter, as for needing proof read unless you've went back and done it other then one & symbole it looked fine to me

Chapter 9
OMG, her mother pisses me off so bad, I mean Jimmy told her of the tourter she went through the day before and yet here she is using Jimmy against Iris when she knows the kids at the shcool are harmful to her child...

I feel so bad for Iris having to hid behind the school like that because the kids wont leave her alone, and are talking about cornering her just because she know's 'the rev' I like how though she seems to already be comparing her parents to Jimmy.

In fact, as I laid in bed and stared at my ceiling in the middle of the night,

the time jump there was a bit confusing for a sec she went from hiding behind her school to laying in her bed I mean it could just be me but this suprised me how quick you jumbed to her being home ..
And now we're back to her being in school maybe I'm just not reading whats going on but the way you time skipped or maybe she was day dreaming either way that had me a bit confused for a momement ..

I like how the people online see to just be like screw off leave her alone and let her come out when she's ready I think that is a good interpretation of how a lot of us fans are like when we see things ...

Wow I cant believe she thinks he'd actually look down on her or that he had a maid..

I love seeing how Iris's thoughts are nothing like what her mother really is thinking or has going on in her head, like how she thinks her parents don't want her to go when in fact her mother does what her to go and be happy...

I swear if chapter 10 doesn't tell me what the two 'adults' said to each other I'm going to be very upset just so you're aware I really want to know what was said sense Iris seems so worried and they seem so calm.

Last thing chapter 9 was no where near short I think you've done gone insane on me but I really like it I like how you showed other people in the story and I love how much Trevor cares for Iris.

So I’m finally all caught up now that I’ve read from where I last read which was chapter seven I’m an awful reader and have failed you so starting with Chapter 8, be ready for my thoughts and comments.

What the hell, how could Jimmy betray her like that seriously he wants her to trust him but he goes and tells her parents, which brings me to her mother what the fuck seriously why hasn’t she stepped in and done more? I really hate this lady…

Wow so her mom is throwing me for a loop now, I really after 13 years she hopes Iris picks Jimmy, that is kind of a bit selfish in a way specially since I know Iris secret…

Okay I understand the whole her kids happyness before her own, but how could she just say oh I hope she goes with you I mean Jimmy basically abandoned her once what if he did it again? I know he’s not going to but what if he did and ya know I

“Then can we start on the fact that this Jocelynn chick is my favorite character in this?” Johnny spoke.

I have to say I disagree so much with short shit right there, I mean yeah its great for Jimmy but what if ya know Iris didn't want to go or she did and things got worse she'd feel like she couldn't go home her parents basically shipped her off while letting her think it was her choice.
I'm really liking where Short shit is coming from about wanting to help her and reaching out to Trevor yeah I think that is a good idea because it would hopfully make the brother realize Jimmy cares.

I like how the rest the band is so behind Jimmy and his wanting his daughter in their lives and how they also want to help I cant wait to find out what Matt thinks is going on and for when Iris shows Short Shit how wrong he was on the whole smart stupid thing..

love how cute and slightly awkward jimmy and iris both are

Great chapter :) looking forward to more!!!!

So Trevor threatened Jimmy...interesting!! Looking forward to more :)

Great chapter :) jimmy is really sweet with iris :) and I loved how she defended Johnny :P looking forward to more :)

Im looking forward to seeing how her weekend with jimmy goes!! And I wonder what Trevor said to him?!? Looking forward to more :)

I want to know what Iris' mum is talking about!!!! Please update soon :) I'm really loving this!!!

I hate that iris thinks that jimmy won't like her if she tells him her problems :( but I can't wait for more :) I want it to be their weekend!!! I can't wait to see what happens!!!

I think I love Iris, I feel so bad for her though because she's going through so much I hated school and the kids when I was her age to, I love how relatable she is and just I really cant wait to see how things go when she spends the five days there.

I'm glad you think just doing this one will be easier I hope it is for you, when you do one shots you should do a Pete one, its not really a request more of a suggestion and you shouldn't worry so much about the sexual stuff, really its not what makes or breaks a story and I know just where you're coming from I'm not comfy writing that kind of stuff either

Much <3 Kat

Its like your story read my mind, I was just thinking why didn't Jimmy come save her and bam he did.

I liked this chapter I think what I like most is that you show what her school life is like, and that she isn't running and telling everyone and them just not caring, when I was bullied I don't think I told a soul till high school when I couldn't handle it any more, so I really like how relatable this story is.

More soon?

Much <3 Kat

Jimmy to the rescue :) looking forward to more!!! The principal was awesome by the way :)

I'm excited for their weekend together!!! Can't wait for more :)

Words can't describe the feelings I'm feeling now. So, i'm going to give you the short version: You're story is just amazing!!! >.< I absolutely love it and can't wait for more. *recommends & subscribes*

I really liked this chapter. I can't wait till Iris meets everyone! :) Update soon please. :)

Wow :) I really love it so far!!! Can't wait for more :)

I really adored that chapter..

Much <3 Kat

Great update! :) Can't wait for the next one. :)

I really like this story! Please update soon! :)