This one-shot was absolutely fantastic. One question... why did you end it with the line "The smallest one took off his hat." ? In respect would be my guess, but oddly enough, it leaves me quite confuzzled ^^
The way you wrote this story was so amazing. It was almost poetic and so compelling. The description... wow. Jesus.
You're fucking amazing, you know that?
I love the plot, and the ending when he is shot was heart wrenching. I love the idea and story of a woman who has lied for longer than she told the truth, you portrayed it hauntingly. I felt for her and the man when they finally found each other, and as I said already, their ending was tragic. The best ones usually are.
One question... why did you end it with the line "The smallest one took off his hat." ?
In respect would be my guess, but oddly enough, it leaves me quite confuzzled
^^