Paper Dreams - Comments

how does this not have more comments? I love this. the writing is so believable. it's not ridiculous, it actually makes sense. I'm so excited for this story. you need to update! that's an order!

update omgg

op this was even more lovely the third time i got to read it op op ~~~final draft status. can't wait for the next chapter since i just helped you plan it op op op good things yup go go write them tomorrow in class okay? okay.
BUT FORREAL OKAY DADDY JOHN WOWWZZZ WHAT'RE PANTS?

As always, totally in love. I'm excited to see how this all plays out. And perfectly done on the whole step-parenting kind of thing. Totally feel that way most of the time when I see my mom with her boyfriend. Really, really related to that! Totally stoked to see what happens next!!!

Ruby is so cute and John is a good father, he's there for her, that's what matter

wait, is jawn gonna take off his pants soon?

OH THIS STORY IS MAH FAVE OH MY GAWDDDD. LYK JAWN IS SO HAWT AND NOW HE'S A DAD I JUST SOB.
AND OMG SARA WHATTA BISH LYK SRSLY

ARE CELESTE AND JAWN GONNA GET MARRIED? DOES RUBY GET A SISTER OR BROTHER SOON? ;) ;)

I want to know more about Celeste! The Sara/John/Ruby situation reminds me of Derek's in "One Day" (great book, terrible ending). In one way I think Sara is just disappointed and wants him to be the best father he can be to her daughter, in another way I guess she's a bitch because she wants

Well that was extremely awkward for Celeste. I'm sure Sara isn't really as bad as I felt she was in this chapter but my gosh she is something. But I'm sure she has reasons for that I love this story, can't wait for the next update!

I'm glad you're updating this again.

love this :)

i want more! i need more! haha

Oh man! I do remember this being something I enjoyed forever ago! I'm so excited now!!! YES! Keep em coming.

You write well, I like it

OH I'M SO EXCITED. YOU SHOULD UPDATE DIS LYK ALL DA TIME, HOMIE.