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  • lovelyacoustic

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    I just got caught up with this little ficcie. WHAT THE FRICK?!?!?! LIAM?! How on earth could he have turned out that way?!!?! It's sweet little LIAM! He's such a freaking prick I want to smack him in the face!!!! Gosh darn it, why would he be like that!!??! LIAM?!?! That cut deep man, real deep.

    He was so cute throughout, I'm so upset by his betrayal of my trust. Sad it was well written and very plausible, but it stung so bad. LIIIIIAM!!!! Waaaah!
    August 3rd, 2013 at 05:52am
  • bettybooboo

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
    July 24th, 2013 at 12:50pm
  • maribaylock

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    Okay so I totally missed those last few chapters, so excuse me while I rant my head off at Liam.

    OHMYGOD WHAT THE FUCK LIAM WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM. I LITERALLLY COULD SPLIT YOU OPEN AND SMASH YOUR BRAIN AGAINST A WALL AND SELL YOU TO THE CANNIBALS. EXCUSE ME, BUT NOBODY FUCKS WITH MY GIRL FRANKIE. NOBODY. AND NOBODY ESPECIALLY FUCKING CHEATS ON HER. OR LIES TO HER. OR FAKES FEELINGS FOR HER, JUST TO GET INTO HER PANTS. WHAT THE FUCK. WHAT THE FUCKING HELL. NO. I JUST. HOW COULD I HAVE EVER BELIEVED IN YOU. I JUST DONT UNDERSTAND. HOW COULD YOU DO THIS. I HATE YOU. I FUCKING HATE YOU. LEAVE. NOW. NEVER COME BACK. DIE. GO BACK TO ENGLAND AND NEVER SHOW UP AGAIN. I HATE YOU. I ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY HATE YOU, YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE.

    ugh. omygod. I just..I cant believe it. I mean..kinda. He was always trying to get into Frankie's pants but..I thought he was being a normal, horny, teenage boy. ugh.

    But Frankie and Jason are perf. I have a special place in my heart for the name Jason, my first love was named that, so as soon as I read his name, I giggled and smiled. That just made me super happy.

    I'm glad that Frankie found the right one. I was rooting for her and Liam, but that FUCKING ASSHOLE had to go and FUCK EVERYTHING UP BY BEING A STUPID FUCKHEAD.

    Sorry. I just..wow. you're amazing at this. If Liam was a real person...he'd be dead. You're amazing at making me forget that he's actually a book character.

    Anyway, all in all, this story was amazing. I loved it from beginning to end, and you're just absolutely the most amazing writer to ever live. I LOVE YOU.
    July 2nd, 2013 at 03:57am
  • maribaylock

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    Okay so I totally missed those last few chapters, so excuse me while I rant my head off at Liam.

    OHMYGOD WHAT THE FUCK LIAM WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM. I LITERALLLY COULD SPLIT YOU OPEN AND SMASH YOUR BRAIN AGAINST A WALL AND SELL YOU TO THE CANNIBALS. EXCUSE ME, BUT NOBODY FUCKS WITH MY GIRL FRANKIE. NOBODY. AND NOBODY ESPECIALLY FUCKING CHEATS ON HER. OR LIES TO HER. OR FAKES FEELINGS FOR HER, JUST TO GET INTO HER PANTS. WHAT THE FUCK. WHAT THE FUCKING HELL. NO. I JUST. HOW COULD I HAVE EVER BELIEVED IN YOU. I JUST DONT UNDERSTAND. HOW COULD YOU DO THIS. I HATE YOU. I FUCKING HATE YOU. LEAVE. NOW. NEVER COME BACK. DIE. GO BACK TO ENGLAND AND NEVER SHOW UP AGAIN. I HATE YOU. I ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY HATE YOU, YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE.

    ugh. omygod. I just..I cant believe it. I mean..kinda. He was always trying to get into Frankie's pants but..I thought he was being a normal, horny, teenage boy. ugh.

    But Frankie and Jason are perf. I have a special place in my heart for the name Jason, my first love was named that, so as soon as I read his name, I giggled and smiled. That just made me super happy.

    I'm glad that Frankie found the right one. I was rooting for her and Liam, but that FUCKING ASSHOLE had to go and FUCK EVERYTHING UP BY BEING A STUPID FUCKHEAD.

    Sorry. I just..wow. you're amazing at this. If Liam was a real person...he'd be dead. You're amazing at making me forget that he's actually a book character.

    Anyway, all in all, this story was amazing. I loved it from beginning to end, and you're just absolutely the most amazing writer to ever live. I LOVE YOU.
    July 2nd, 2013 at 03:57am
  • HeyTherePerson25

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    I was kinda hoping she'd end up with Liam, BUUUUUT, it's okay cos she deserves a better ending than she would've had with him(:
    July 2nd, 2013 at 01:23am
  • DaniGates

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    Well shit. I was kind of, slightly, maybe a little, expecting her to end up with Liam. But I think you made him too much of an asshole in this story that the ending was fitting. I can't believe this story is already over. Ugh! I was in love with the characters. Either way. I loved this story and it's sad to see it end. But, as I've mentioned before, there's an end to a story eventually. Well, it's been a fun ride. Hope to see more amazing stories in the future! :DDDDDDD
    June 30th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • dawn of light

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    aweeh graduation LOL
    GOOD JOB LADIES! heh
    COLLEGE WOOOOOOHOOOO :)
    whoa....too much people
    hahhaa
    don't you dare look at Liam, Frankie
    no, I won't allow you to
    ITS NOT FUN TO PLAY WITH GIRLS
    Liam's interest was mean and whorifying LOL
    aweeh her parents were so sweet!
    GOOD THING THEY WERE ANGRY TOO lol
    HA HA LIAM HAS TO GO TO SCHOOL AGAIN HA HA
    ^ i felt good to say that HA HA sucks to suck
    aweeeh Jason :')
    that was sooooo cutttttttte omg :)
    WAIT WHERE DID THIS JASON COME FROM
    even though that was the most adorable thing evaaaaa
    FRANKIE YOU ARE SO CUTE WITH THIS JASON PERSON
    hahahhahahahah her family is sooo hilarious!
    JASOOOOOON YOU'RE SOOOOOO SWEEET
    HEHE
    I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
    This was one of my favorite stories <3
    June 29th, 2013 at 09:17pm
  • Moments-of-Courage

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    ♥ I loved this ending so much, it was so witty, and humerous. I loved it. And her fatherrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!! So perfect hahahahaha I snorted at his comments. And Jaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssooooooonnnnnnn, he seemed like a cutie, she should keep him :P In any case, this story was also awesome, and I loved it. Thank you for being so amazingly awesome at life. I appreciate you for existing. Now, I shall get going so that I can write a little more and get changed for work :P
    June 29th, 2013 at 04:01pm
  • bxgurl95

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    I like that your stories don't all end the same way
    June 29th, 2013 at 07:40am
  • dawn of light

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    still can't believe Liam
    LIAM, UGGGH NO
    just no
    good bye
    YOU SHOULD'VE TRIPPED HIM FRANKIE
    manny, yes you are right!
    LIAM DOESN'T DESERVE ANYTHING FOR FRANKIE
    not even her hatred towards him LOL
    during the game, Liam better not try to do anything with Frankie
    I will throw a cow at Liam
    seriously hahahaha
    he is a poopy person, just saying
    i am still angry with him
    like no
    go back to England bro
    YOU SHOULDN'T BE JEALOUS FRANKIE
    HES A MEANIE WHO DOESNT KNOW HOW TO RESPECT GIRLS
    not worth it
    trust me
    Frankie, just kick him in the balls with the soccer ball please
    NO FRANKIE
    NO BUTTERFLIES
    NO
    I FORBID
    PLEASE NO
    don't get sucked into Liam's games again
    FWB?!
    REALLY LIAM -____-
    UGGH no.
    she still found him attractive NOOOO!
    true with what she said though
    WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN IN THE NEXT CHAPTER
    I dont think Liam's going change his attitude
    I CANT WAIT HEH
    June 28th, 2013 at 10:17pm
  • DaniGates

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    Oh no! Seriously??? One more chapter? That's it? No, no, nooo! I can't wait for it! I hope everything will be resolved!!!
    June 28th, 2013 at 04:06am
  • bxgurl95

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    Well at least she feels like the closure feels good.
    June 28th, 2013 at 02:42am
  • GoodGirl;

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    I still sort of hate him... But.. I don't know.. I feel like there's more on his part; maybe he has a reason? That sounds stupid
    June 28th, 2013 at 02:41am
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    I still sort of hate him... But.. I don't know.. I feel like there's more on his part; maybe he has a reason? That sounds stupid
    June 28th, 2013 at 02:41am
  • naomi_t

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    It doesn't feel like the end
    June 28th, 2013 at 01:11am
  • naomi_t

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    It doesn't feel like the end
    June 28th, 2013 at 01:11am
  • HeyTherePerson25

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    if i was frankie, i would've punched him in the f'n throat! ugh, that pissed even ME off >.<
    June 27th, 2013 at 08:05pm
  • DaniGates

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    What the shit!?!?! Why is Liam such a damn tool in this story? I hope Frankie becomes a super famous soccer player in the future and regrets not being nicer to the ultimate champion of women's soccer. Ugh! I don't know. I can't even. More soon! Please!
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:05am
  • GoodGirl;

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    IM SO PISSED!! OMG
    June 26th, 2013 at 10:20pm
  • Moments-of-Courage

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    You go, Frankie! Liam is a jerk.....that is clearly a euphemism, but you know what I'm trying to say. Honestly....like he's an asshole, though, if you think about it, some of what he said was technically true, though it doesn't mean it's right to play with a girl like that at all. That's ridiculous. Bad Liam....very bad Liam....go back to England. She was looking at colleges there for you....s;dgkjb;sdknSAKDju Just no. What an ass....that is all I can say to Mr. Payne there....and honey...long black socks? Can you saw ew? I can: ew. No no....Just no. Manny, please come and comfort Frankie, she needs girl time, just do it. You are perfect ♥ And your writing is flawless, and I love this story. I've loved it from the beginning and I'm sad that it's nearly over. Thank you for this story :P
    June 26th, 2013 at 05:24pm