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  • bettybooboo

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    I love this story so much please write more... for me?
    June 13th, 2013 at 11:00pm
  • DaniGates

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    D'awww! Liam is just too precious! I adored this update! More soon, babe! :D
    June 13th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • dawn of light

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    Aweeh Liam you're so cute
    Hhahhahaha why so nervous? lol.
    Liam's anxiety is funny! HHAHHAHAHAHA
    oh Liam, you broke the gravy boat!
    HAHAHHAHHAHHA
    great first impression! lol
    HHAHHH her dad!
    omg, her dad is hilarious!
    ahhhahahaha omg her mom too!
    ooooOooooO Liam brought up the touchy topic of going home!
    i forgot about that! oooooOOooooo
    I'M TAKING AP CHEM NEXT YEAR. oh gosh, i relate by that lol. i'm strange..
    i'm glad the dinner was great! hehe
    June 12th, 2013 at 11:05pm
  • hollybear

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    Oh liam you're so charming Mr. Green
    June 12th, 2013 at 10:35pm
  • Moments-of-Courage

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    This story. I love you and your writing and just this. Excuse me while I cry in a corner at it's perfection. Like....I can't even do this. I really can't. I was laughing so hard because he dropped the gravy boat. Hahaha, I can't even. If anything bad was going to happen, that would be it. Then, the sweetness of their relationship. It has the perfect balance of sweet, competitive flare, maturity, and humor that always has me smiling. It's just perfect. Thanks for writing. You are awesome. Goodbye :P POTAAAATTOOOO!
    June 12th, 2013 at 05:45pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Lol at least it wasn't a family heirloom
    June 12th, 2013 at 03:45pm
  • bettybooboo

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    Say what? Another one? Girl, how do you find the time?
    this quote is the first comment on this story so yeh
    June 8th, 2013 at 12:01am
  • Caitosaur.

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    DAMMIT BEN!
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    June 2nd, 2013 at 07:43am
  • DaniGates

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    Aw, poor Manny. She needs a break. I'm glad Frankie is there for her :D
    More soon, please :D
    June 1st, 2013 at 11:30pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    :( Why does that always happen? :(
    June 1st, 2013 at 04:14pm
  • dawn of light

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    I realize that Manny is hardcore. LOL
    I hope she's okay....
    thank goodness she's not pregnant
    BUT GOSH BEN WAS SUCH A BUTT
    I CANT EXPLAIN MY HATRED TO GUYS LIKE THAT
    seriously?!
    Manny deserves better!
    Frankie is so sweet to her!
    June 1st, 2013 at 08:20am
  • maribaylock

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    BENJAMIN WHATEVER THE FUCK YOUR LAST NAME IS HOW DARE YOU HURT MANNY.

    Like. What. In. The. World. What even was he thinking?? gah. smh. he had a flipping girlfriend. smh. that...that's just wrongg.

    LIAM BETTER NOT EVEN THINK ABOUT CHEATING ON FRANKIE.

    So many feels in one chapter, I just can't even deal with them all. asdfghjkl
    June 1st, 2013 at 05:37am
  • bxgurl95

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    Once a cheater always a cheater!
    June 1st, 2013 at 05:28am
  • DaniGates

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    Oh no! What's going on? More soon, babe! :DDDD
    May 27th, 2013 at 11:53pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    SHE'S PREGNANT!! Did she pull a Sandy and sleep with someone that isn't her boy? And is she going to Florida? (tehe Outsiders <3)
    May 27th, 2013 at 02:55am
  • bxgurl95

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    Ah milk, the soothing elixir to all :)
    May 27th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • dawn of light

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    omg I can't imagine Liam all like that !
    HAHAHHAAH omg
    He ask that question every time!

    WHAT IS GOING ON WITH THE BIFFLE?!
    OMOGMOGM the comment below me........dang that could be right
    May 27th, 2013 at 12:22am
  • Caitlynnnn

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    SHE'S PREGNANT, ISNT SHE???
    May 27th, 2013 at 12:00am
  • maribaylock

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    Awwwhh Li and Frankie are absolutely cute hahaha I love Liam's constant sex jokes. xD Such a typical teenaged boy smh. xD

    I'm so excited for him to meet her parents...that's gonna be absolutely amazing. ^.^

    Umm.. MANNY WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER HELP ME UNDERSTAND IF IT'S THAT STUPID BOY OF HERS BEN WHATHISFACE I'M GOING TO SMACK HIS PRETTYBOY FACE RIGHT OFF.

    Ugh. Cliffhangers will be the death of me, I swear.

    Anywho, wonderful update! Can't wait for more!
    May 26th, 2013 at 11:38pm
  • dawn of light

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    I'M YOUR 100TH COMMENTER <3

    The thought of kissing Liam Payne.

    OH GUUUD

    OHHHHHH GUUUUUD

    manny ! HAHHAHAHA omg "how was he?" OH HAHAHHA

    that's an interesting theory about the burgers hahahahha

    UGH TOTALLY FORGOT LIAM MIGHT BE GOING BACK SOON

    Frankie's probably going to regret why she should've dated Liam sooner ;)

    their constant bickering is hilarious ! hahahha

    Dirty Dancing is ahmazzzin

    This was loved <3 I'm so sorry my comments have been late :'(
    May 19th, 2013 at 08:03am