The Walking Boy - Comments

This is so good ahh please update ASAP!!

Ugh update soon please!

i need them to continue to be this cute together. i do not want oliver to change his mind. ahhh my feelings

I agree with what skyelilly said! Hopefully it won't end that way!
I love this story so much, update soon pretty please :)

I almost ended up eating the couch cushion to stop myself from scaring my cat with my happy squeals. Especially when he gave her the picture and then they kissed. They really need to be together. They are so right for each other even if Oli doesn't realize it yet. Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Now I feel like this is going to be all sunshine and rainbows for the night, but in the morning Oliver is going to go swiftly back to his I don't want to be with you attitude which is going to lead to her having a broken heart... Please don't make us wait too long:)

Yay, update ♥

That chapter was really cute. I like that she got a frame with "best friends" on it, because even if they do end up together they should still be best friends. Yeah, it was just adorable.

Thank you for entering my contest, love.
So firstly, the layout is stunning. Your banner is lovely, whoever made that has talent! I love the way you developed your characters, you took time to do so, which was nice to read. I think your plot is fantastic, there's an awful lot that can happen with this one, and I think you're using it very wisely. I think this amazing so far, but I have one query. I'm not sure if you read my contest rules, but all entries must be completely finished before the 5th of August in order to have a chance of winning 1st place. I'm worried that this one won't be.

I'm growing impatient! I need an update! This is such a wonderful story, definitely a favorite.

I am in love. Your writing is amazing and I can not wait for more! Update soon! <3

You're amazing. KEEP WRITING AS IN LIKE NOW.

I love it. Oli is confusing but I love it. I would leave a longer text but I'm on my way home after a hard night of loving all time low as you may saw on Instagram. Hahaha xo

This chapter is just awesome! I'm feeling so connected with Natalie because when I read it, I was also hung over (still am). And I'm really grumpy as well when it's the case hahaha. I was so happy when I saw that you update when I came home. I was like "Yay! I can read the new chapter, and then sleep again!".
It is a really really long chapter and I loved it! Finally she just tells her mother her thoughts and I'm glad she did it. It was a pretty hard scene but necessary. I don't know how you're gonna end this story, but I think you're not gonna let this situation remains like that. It's what I like about your story : it's focused on Natalie but not only on her story with Oliver. You actually succeed to find a role and a story with each character. The issue with her mother is probably my favourite one (maybe it's weird, I know) because I find it very complex and interesting. And family's issues are very frequent, so it's realistic. I really like Natalie's relationship with her sister too.
I'm really excited about the next chapter, which, I suppose, will focus on Natalie and Oliver (even if I like the others characters, I like them more ok? :3). What's her present??? What's going to happen? To be continued...... (Too much suspens! Can't handle it!)

Okay so I know, I wrote less than usually but I'm really tired, so I can't think properly ._. And I was less funny also... Yeah I KNOW I have always a funny quote to say, but today.. I just can't. I'm gonna go to sleep right now so... Hope the 18th chapter will appear soon! Maybe at a moment when I won't expect it. See you next time! :) xx
(Um... I thought my comment was shorter than usually but... maybe not haha)

What did Oli get to her? :3

This story is just the best. I love it.

i loved this update! i was so happy that oli came, and i was glad she finally confronted her mother. great work! :-)

I think you just killed me??? Even if it caused a slight scene, I LOVED what Natalie said to her mother. I felt she needed to let it out for once. Can't wait for the next update !

This story is amazing, I love it so much (:
Great update
<3

Ugh another chapter from one of my favorite stories that makes me want to make them kiss. Haha =D I loved it! I'm really connecting with Natalie because I'm having issues with my own mother right now. I'm happy to see another update and hope you put out a new one soon. I followed your tumblr. Mine is the same as on here ChrystalCaper. =)