The Walking Boy - Comments

This story is REALLY good. I'm excited to see where you take it. You know we'd enjoy another chapter or five ;)

This is seriously my favorite Oli story I've read. They are just the cutest. Can't wait to read more! =D

Oli and Natalie go well together (: the lunch was cute

Really like this so far, looking forward to more :)

I love this. Only four chapters in and it's already one of my favorites. c:
Natalie and Oli are adorable together. I can't wait for the next update.
<3

Love how oli is openin up now :)

I really like this story! Great chapter by the way can't wait for the me t update(:

Awwwww I loved this chapter. Oli and Natalie are so cute together. Especially how they can just talk and feel so comfortable even though they seem like opposites. =) Can't wait to read the next update. Hope its soon.

I'm seriously lovin' this story, Natalie's a cute character and the banter between Oli and her is nice update soon!

I like this story tons so far, the characters are lovely. Please update soon <3

Wow this story is amazing, and so interesting. Very different from others I've read, please update soon :)

Please update soon :)

This is my first time reading an Oli story and I love it so far! =) Can't wait to read more.

Love love loveee

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I'm honestly interested to see what happens in the upcoming chapters. I wonder if something's going to happen with Natalie and Oliver, I sure hope so!

Everything was flawlessly written, I didn't see any grammar mistakes or anything. Keep it up! Can't wait to read more. :3

I love how she called Oli interesting, aha im inlove with this story already update soon!!

Very excited for this!